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1/9/2009 c21 1flawedxu
ah, it's over! I absolutely loved this story, and the ending was great. I'm so glad Jake and her are finally together, together. lol. Took a long time, but finally. Great story, I'm definitely going to keep up with your new story now.
1/9/2009 c21 dust and glitter
Ahh, I'm sorry, I don't think I reviewed the last chapter? Grr. My bad. I've just swapped internet browser back to Mozilla from Safari. It's a pain :(

ANYWAY, a review from both chapters:

Previous: AH. DYING FROM THE LOVE. WISHING I HAD SOMEONE RIGHT ABOUT NOW. The fluff, I love it (: One thing, at one point, when you've got Jake lying beside Hannah, you've said "he lied down beside her" or something. I think it's meant to be "he lay down beside her" ? I'm not sure... Double-check? ;) Still, amazing though.

Final chapter: OMGZ. THE LOVE. I LOVE THE LOVE. I LOVE THIS FINAL CHAPTER. I LOVE IT. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT. You've done it so perfectly, so wonderfully. It fits well and it's just... amazing. This story is seriously wonderful. Congrats on finishing, you're an amazing author and I hope you keep writing :)

Well, I'm switching to The Brat Pack now :) See you there ;D

xx
1/9/2009 c21 2JusticeWriter
Dude, I love you! This chapter totally rocked! Seriously!
1/9/2009 c21 kaw97
That was a great ending! Although I didn't realize it was going to be the end, so I was very disappointed. I look forward to The Brat Pack.
1/9/2009 c21 CATpuccino
aw... is it finish now? officially?

weeww. it was sweet and GREAT.
1/9/2009 c21 1DuchessYappingDog
Ah! These two little nincompoops are finally together! It really makes my insides feel fluttery and happy. Agh!~ Sigh. Kiss kiss, hahaha.
1/8/2009 c21 8JamieBell
Aw! So wonderful! And I love blunt people. I wish I could be like that. There was a girl in my class today that was like, "Can I sit with you girls from now on-every day? I have no friends in this class." I just grinned and was like, "You rock! I love blunt people who just say what's on their mind." And I wish I could do that, just say what I feel when I feel it and not be scared. That would be a good way to be. So here I go. I love this story. It's wonderful, it was well-paced, it had a good plot, and just funny. I loved it! I love it. :) I'm sorry it's over, but thank you so much for sharing your talents with us! :)
1/8/2009 c21 1funnechick
I loved Hannah's line, can we stop the bs and just get together already...haha, way to be blunt! But it was perfect because Jake is such a wuss sometimes-well, most of the time-and who knows how long their conversation would've gone on without them actually getting together had she not said that. But I'm so sad that this story is over...I really wish I could read a bit more Jake & Hannah fluff...oh well, I'll really miss reading this story.
1/8/2009 c20 1Joanikens
This story is so cute and adorable! I'm so glad things are working out better for them now. UPDATE ASAP
1/8/2009 c20 54big.break.and.laryngitis
aw. cute.
1/8/2009 c20 6RinHattori
Well, you've done it again. This chapter was great, but i do have a few comments. The ending, meaning the last couple paragraphs, was a bit rushed. It seems to me as if you were trying to end the chapter without a cliffhanger or something similar. Great chapter and cannot wait to read the ending! Looks like there will be a happy ending. Yay! :)
1/8/2009 c20 Reiyama41
Aw! Jake and Hannah make SUCH a cute couple! Update soon!
1/8/2009 c20 8Veronica Kimble
aw. thats just way too cute! theyre together now! cant wait for the next chapter :)
1/8/2009 c20 oliil
He kissed her :) Oh yeah!
1/8/2009 c20 8JamieBell
He. Teehe! I don't have anything else to say. Except I've got a huge smile on my face. He! Oh I'm happy.

P.S. I've got one teeny critique. Past tense of "lie" when you are talking about lying down is "lay." I noticed you had "lied" a couple times, which you would use when you talk about people *telling* lies. :)
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