for The Apocalypse1/8/2009 c20 
8JamieBell
He. Teehe! I don't have anything else to say. Except I've got a huge smile on my face. He! Oh I'm happy.
P.S. I've got one teeny critique. Past tense of "lie" when you are talking about lying down is "lay." I noticed you had "lied" a couple times, which you would use when you talk about people *telling* lies. :)
8JamieBellHe. Teehe! I don't have anything else to say. Except I've got a huge smile on my face. He! Oh I'm happy.
P.S. I've got one teeny critique. Past tense of "lie" when you are talking about lying down is "lay." I noticed you had "lied" a couple times, which you would use when you talk about people *telling* lies. :)
1/8/2009 c20 4Gizmobunny
That was so adorable! I actually giggled at the end there. I am as much a sucker for a happy ending as I am a sucker for a sob story. And this is pretty much freakishly amazing. Love it!
4GizmobunnyThat was so adorable! I actually giggled at the end there. I am as much a sucker for a happy ending as I am a sucker for a sob story. And this is pretty much freakishly amazing. Love it!
1/8/2009 c20 belle1220
I'm so glad you're not dragging this out and that Jake confessed his confused feelings for Hannah. Loved it!
You can stay in college if you keep up with the fast updating ;)
I'm so glad you're not dragging this out and that Jake confessed his confused feelings for Hannah. Loved it!
You can stay in college if you keep up with the fast updating ;)
1/8/2009 c20 malloluvsya
Yay, yay, yay! Such a good chapter, and great progress for Hannah and Jake. Can't wait for what's to come.
-Mallory
Yay, yay, yay! Such a good chapter, and great progress for Hannah and Jake. Can't wait for what's to come.
-Mallory
1/8/2009 c20 OrangeSodaRocks
Aw! Jake and Hannah are so, so cute! I'm really glad that Hannah let Jake explain himself; he would have deserved that no matter what. She was a bit eerily calm about it, but, since this chapter was in Jake's POV, I'm sure she had her reasons. I can't wait to see what those were. Ahh, it's all falling together! ;) I'm excited for them!
Isaac and Avalon. You know, I've loved Isaac all along, and I'm not really sure why because he can be very annoying. :P Haha. But I'm happy for him and Avalon too, and I'd actually love to see a scene with them. It'd be so cute!
As excited as I am to hear the end is coming for this story (because I'm hoping your sad ending reputation will be shaken up! :)), I'm also sad. It's bittersweet because I love these characters so much!
Aw! Jake and Hannah are so, so cute! I'm really glad that Hannah let Jake explain himself; he would have deserved that no matter what. She was a bit eerily calm about it, but, since this chapter was in Jake's POV, I'm sure she had her reasons. I can't wait to see what those were. Ahh, it's all falling together! ;) I'm excited for them!
Isaac and Avalon. You know, I've loved Isaac all along, and I'm not really sure why because he can be very annoying. :P Haha. But I'm happy for him and Avalon too, and I'd actually love to see a scene with them. It'd be so cute!
As excited as I am to hear the end is coming for this story (because I'm hoping your sad ending reputation will be shaken up! :)), I'm also sad. It's bittersweet because I love these characters so much!
1/8/2009 c19 OrangeSodaRocks
Hahaha! I loved the conversation between Reagan and Hannah. Actually, I love how bitter Hannah was throughout the chapter. She has every reason to be extremely mad, even though I wish she wasn't because I so want Jake to be happy!
It's hilarious how both Jake and Hannah think the other is out to get them. I love that. It really shows how much their past hatred has affected them; it's a very interesting thing to get over. And I really hope they can!
fabulous writing, Miss Duck! ;)
Hahaha! I loved the conversation between Reagan and Hannah. Actually, I love how bitter Hannah was throughout the chapter. She has every reason to be extremely mad, even though I wish she wasn't because I so want Jake to be happy!
It's hilarious how both Jake and Hannah think the other is out to get them. I love that. It really shows how much their past hatred has affected them; it's a very interesting thing to get over. And I really hope they can!
fabulous writing, Miss Duck! ;)
1/8/2009 c20 3The Innocent One 17
Awe! that's sweet! best chapter to read before going to sleep. well gtg got skool in seven hours!
3The Innocent One 17Awe! that's sweet! best chapter to read before going to sleep. well gtg got skool in seven hours!
1/7/2009 c20 1funnechick
Aww...I can't believe Hannah so readily forgave Jake...I guess the amnesia really did change her (at least to a certain extent). But whatever the reason, I'm glad that they are back on good terms and that Jake actually kissed her! Yay! I wonder how they will be around each other now? Will they only act like "just friends" in public but be closer when they're alone? And will they have anymore obstacles on the way to (hopefully, eventually) becoming a couple?
Well, this was a great chapter and I can't wait to read the next one!
1funnechickAww...I can't believe Hannah so readily forgave Jake...I guess the amnesia really did change her (at least to a certain extent). But whatever the reason, I'm glad that they are back on good terms and that Jake actually kissed her! Yay! I wonder how they will be around each other now? Will they only act like "just friends" in public but be closer when they're alone? And will they have anymore obstacles on the way to (hopefully, eventually) becoming a couple?
Well, this was a great chapter and I can't wait to read the next one!
1/7/2009 c19 8Veronica Kimble
oh my effin god. that was so freaking adorable. i just wish they would end up together already! update soon!
8Veronica Kimbleoh my effin god. that was so freaking adorable. i just wish they would end up together already! update soon!
1/6/2009 c19 ConverseLover
OMG! I love Jake and I hope everything will be ok! Hopefully Hannah won't be so hard on him.. I absolutely love him
OMG! I love Jake and I hope everything will be ok! Hopefully Hannah won't be so hard on him.. I absolutely love him
1/5/2009 c19 4Gizmobunny
I am in love with this story.
And that's kind of saying something for me. This makes the third romance story on this website that I actually like. And I like it a lot. I think this might be my favorite story I've ever read on Fictionpress. I've never had amnesia or anything, but all of the characters are so believable and likable (I mean, the ones that are supposed to be liked). And a bit of coincidence, my boyfriend's name is Jake, and he has the exact same family situation and relationship with my parents and everything. I really hope this story isn't foreshadowing anything...
Anyway, I'm super excited for the next update! This is fabulous!
4GizmobunnyI am in love with this story.
And that's kind of saying something for me. This makes the third romance story on this website that I actually like. And I like it a lot. I think this might be my favorite story I've ever read on Fictionpress. I've never had amnesia or anything, but all of the characters are so believable and likable (I mean, the ones that are supposed to be liked). And a bit of coincidence, my boyfriend's name is Jake, and he has the exact same family situation and relationship with my parents and everything. I really hope this story isn't foreshadowing anything...
Anyway, I'm super excited for the next update! This is fabulous!