for The Apocalypse12/29/2013 c22 
1BoundaryBreaker
Well, even though I'm very behind on reading this, it was really freaking good. I'm so glad I had the opportunity to read this, because it was a phenomenally well developed story. Thank you for writing this.
1BoundaryBreakerWell, even though I'm very behind on reading this, it was really freaking good. I'm so glad I had the opportunity to read this, because it was a phenomenally well developed story. Thank you for writing this.
12/21/2013 c22 PenguinLover33
This story is awesome! Good job. It definitely kept me interested and when I wasn't reading it, I was thinking about it
This story is awesome! Good job. It definitely kept me interested and when I wasn't reading it, I was thinking about it
12/3/2013 c22 Jay
Wow, you are so good! No you are amazing!
Wow, you are so good! No you are amazing!
8/28/2013 c11 2artistic dreamer
wow, i knew their hatred (or at least hannah's) for each other was something deeper than just playing pranks on one another, but i was definitely pleasantly surprised to see that she had already admitted to herself a long time ago that she was in love with jake. that's comforting to know that even though she has amnesia, her feelings are for reals. as for jake, i am so confused, he still goes about like he hates her and doesn't like to be around her...but is willing to be her helper friend or whatever, and actually stood up for her enough to quit...that's pretty cool, but i can't tell if he really has feelings for her yet.
2artistic dreamerwow, i knew their hatred (or at least hannah's) for each other was something deeper than just playing pranks on one another, but i was definitely pleasantly surprised to see that she had already admitted to herself a long time ago that she was in love with jake. that's comforting to know that even though she has amnesia, her feelings are for reals. as for jake, i am so confused, he still goes about like he hates her and doesn't like to be around her...but is willing to be her helper friend or whatever, and actually stood up for her enough to quit...that's pretty cool, but i can't tell if he really has feelings for her yet.
8/2/2013 c21 The Broken Idealist
One of the great liberties of being a teenage girl unbound by responsibilities is indulging in beautiful anonymous literature online. This story was absolutely perfect, and I just loved how you took their relationship dynamic and made it evolve.
One of the great liberties of being a teenage girl unbound by responsibilities is indulging in beautiful anonymous literature online. This story was absolutely perfect, and I just loved how you took their relationship dynamic and made it evolve.
7/27/2013 c21 3LunaRain
P.S. I'm glad you didn't put down this story even after finding out someone had plagiarized it. Some Writers have been removing theirs after the sad and maddening event. Though I could understand their feelings for it, I just don't understand the sense of having it removed when the story was originally theirs.
The only thing I'm saying is, their letting this plagiarizers beat them to a corner... Or something like that. Anyways thank you for the wonderful story.
3LunaRainP.S. I'm glad you didn't put down this story even after finding out someone had plagiarized it. Some Writers have been removing theirs after the sad and maddening event. Though I could understand their feelings for it, I just don't understand the sense of having it removed when the story was originally theirs.
The only thing I'm saying is, their letting this plagiarizers beat them to a corner... Or something like that. Anyways thank you for the wonderful story.
7/27/2013 c22 LunaRain
Hi I love your story. It's great! I thought for one moment that Mercedes would still but in after what she did during the party. You can't really know a person until you know them. Anyways I've also read the sequel one-shot and The Genesis though until the current chapter you have. Long distance relationships are really hard to maintain. So, sad... T_T I'll be waiting patiently for your updates there. ;)
Hi I love your story. It's great! I thought for one moment that Mercedes would still but in after what she did during the party. You can't really know a person until you know them. Anyways I've also read the sequel one-shot and The Genesis though until the current chapter you have. Long distance relationships are really hard to maintain. So, sad... T_T I'll be waiting patiently for your updates there. ;)
6/2/2013 c21 glowingstar101
This is so cute! They've totally been in love for way too long but been oblivious to it.
This is so cute! They've totally been in love for way too long but been oblivious to it.
5/12/2013 c21 1Mimer Limer
Omg I love it it is so cute, I just wish there were more chapters to follow their raletionship, and while Trisha and Hannah were stalking Avalon, I thought that Isaac was gunna come up and the instead of stalking Avalon they would be spying on their date, that would've been adorable... But regardless you story is still amazing and you did an awesome job!
1Mimer LimerOmg I love it it is so cute, I just wish there were more chapters to follow their raletionship, and while Trisha and Hannah were stalking Avalon, I thought that Isaac was gunna come up and the instead of stalking Avalon they would be spying on their date, that would've been adorable... But regardless you story is still amazing and you did an awesome job!
4/12/2013 c1 1Kaitlyn Noble
This may be the inner writer in me, but I have a sneeking suspicion that the whole "Hannah-stealing-Jake's-first-kiss-in-front-of-his -crush" event will come up again in later chapters.
Loving this so far! Off to read some more...
1Kaitlyn NobleThis may be the inner writer in me, but I have a sneeking suspicion that the whole "Hannah-stealing-Jake's-first-kiss-in-front-of-his -crush" event will come up again in later chapters.
Loving this so far! Off to read some more...
3/21/2013 c22 Guest
This story was amazing... please continue
This story was amazing... please continue
1/27/2013 c22 9TrueRebellion14
I can honestly say that I was completely giddy reading this story. In fact, I continued to giggle whenever Hannah and Jake got closer and closer together that my entire family gave me the evil eye and left me to my own devices. I just could not stop reading this story and after reading "The Metamorphosis" and "The Genesis" I felt my heart going out to Hannah and Jake. I can't wait to read more!
9TrueRebellion14I can honestly say that I was completely giddy reading this story. In fact, I continued to giggle whenever Hannah and Jake got closer and closer together that my entire family gave me the evil eye and left me to my own devices. I just could not stop reading this story and after reading "The Metamorphosis" and "The Genesis" I felt my heart going out to Hannah and Jake. I can't wait to read more!