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7/12/2007 c3 Chowdizzle
Ah update soon! Can't wait for more :)
7/12/2007 c3 4Lady Katreina
This is an awesome story so far. I don't like the amnesia stories where -no- trace of their former selves are there. Like the characters pointed out she dashed out on dishes (that's a survival thing anyways, but there are those born without that necessary gene.) And, while confused, she's still trying to make it through.

Thank you for this story, I can't wait to see how Jake's going to take her turn-around.
7/8/2007 c2 5darkangelsonic
So far so good I'd like to see how this will end up... So keep them coming, and soon. :P
7/8/2007 c2 InspiredByAKiss
Too lazy to log in... I used to be Serabi, lol. Uhm, I added this to my fave's the day you posted it, but I was too lazy (again) to review. I like both Hannah and Jake. I feel so sorry for Hannah's family especially, it must be hard to suddenly have your daughter/sister not remembering you. Is Hannah going to have a change of personality? I once read in a magazine about a girl who woke up with amnesia after a coma and all of a sudden became a girlygirl who liked to party and enjoyed going out with boys, while she was apparently more of a bookworm who didn't care about clothes or make-up before her coma. Or so her supersurprised family told her. I just hope Hannah gets back her memory eventually!

I wonder how Jake's going to pull it off if he uses the amnesia for his advantage. Everyone knows about them hating each other so... It's okay if he just befriends her, but maybe he's going to befriend her just to hurt her afterwards as some sort of revenge? Lol, I really don't know.

Hope you update soon! But I also hope you'll keep up the pretty regular updates of your other story :D cause I still love Codi and Alex and Aubrey and Austin the most!
7/8/2007 c2 DeadCooKie
jake sounds a bit heartless , hannah could have been dying and all he is worried about is of issac?

And i got the feeling that hannah didn't like him in the first chapter ,so how come she has pictures of jake on her wall?

The amnesia factor sounds interesting , so will she get a complete personality make over?
7/6/2007 c2 XxUnLikelyAnGeLxX
This story is so cool. I love your characters. You got my support. Good luck with the next xhapter ^-^!
7/6/2007 c2 8JamieBell
Very interesting premises...I admit, I've seen some stuff like this floating around, but this is the only one that actually makes a case of amneseia sound reasonable. :D Good for you! The rivalry is cliche, but the list of awful things they've done to each other is definitely original. I do like the gory stuff they'd do to keep from marrying each other-makes for a refreshing read, haha! I look forward to reading more!

Always,

Margaret
7/6/2007 c1 NightSkye18
lol I love thier banter. It's refeshing and genuinely funny. This story seems like it's headed in a great direction. Keep at it please. ^_^ My curiousity is itching to be satisfied.

~...* NightSkye 18 *...~
7/5/2007 c1 3substitute angel
This is an interesting start. The title's interesting too. I'm already waiting for the next chapter. I hope you update soon. I didn't see anything wrong with this chapter, grammar wise, and I think you've set it up nicely so good work.

Lacy
7/1/2007 c1 5Far.abi
interesting. when is she getting hit?
7/1/2007 c1 5darkangelsonic
This was nice I'd like to see what happens next. :D
7/1/2007 c1 xoxo-Hannah-xoxo
i wish i could say that there was something i really disliked in this story, but there isn't! i absolutely loved it to death! The fighting and bickering between Hannah and Jake is just hilarious and i had a really good laugh in the first chapter...something about tater-tots just makes me giggle (we don't really call them that where i come from so i think that's it).

i read the summary before i read the story and in the 2nd chapter, right at the very end when Hannah is mentioning about how she and Greg are driving in the snow i just felt this sudden sadness after all the smiling i'd been doing because i knew it was foreshadowing what was to come. Really good job there :)

I think Hannah's character is by far the best, most developed so far (for obvious reasons), you've made her really down to earth and easy to relate to so i think that's probably why this has been such a good read so far. That and of course the good use of dialogue, i like that, it keeps my attetion XD

Anyway... more importantly PLEASE PLEASE update! i'm dying to read more!

keep up the good work

xx hannah (yeah thats really my name :D )
7/1/2007 c1 DeadCooKie
I really like your story ,its amusing. And hopefully it'll be different from the usual love-hate stories.
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