for Perfection9/18/2015 c14 Guest
the way you change the dialogue from " " to ' ' is making me confused. for all i know, ' ' is only used to what the character's thought or something that have two or more meaning.
i like your story. you can tell me and correct if somewhat i'm wrong.
sorry for the bad english.
the way you change the dialogue from " " to ' ' is making me confused. for all i know, ' ' is only used to what the character's thought or something that have two or more meaning.
i like your story. you can tell me and correct if somewhat i'm wrong.
sorry for the bad english.
9/12/2013 c14 Ellmers00
You can't leave it there O_O This story is awesome. Please you have to continue I love this story!
You can't leave it there O_O This story is awesome. Please you have to continue I love this story!
4/24/2013 c12 Slytherinjunky
What are the titles of some of the stories they've written? and then the genre and so on. that didn't work for me
What are the titles of some of the stories they've written? and then the genre and so on. that didn't work for me
4/24/2013 c6 Slytherinjunky
I know you have already finished it but I was wondering if you could write an alternate ending or something? I mean... I really like my double suicide idea... :3
I know you have already finished it but I was wondering if you could write an alternate ending or something? I mean... I really like my double suicide idea... :3
4/24/2013 c5 Slytherinjunky
so I'm guessing no double suicide? That would have been fun. But I guess he's going to fall in love with her and become gentle and everything and they'll fall in love... it's so... generic and predictable. Everyone always wants to have good endings... *sigh* it's your story but I think there should be some more trauma.
A thought just occurred to me hehehehehe.
so I'm guessing no double suicide? That would have been fun. But I guess he's going to fall in love with her and become gentle and everything and they'll fall in love... it's so... generic and predictable. Everyone always wants to have good endings... *sigh* it's your story but I think there should be some more trauma.
A thought just occurred to me hehehehehe.
4/24/2013 c2 Slytherinjunky
I feel like at the end he should kill himself and then her. and the end should read something like 'as Alex brought the gun to his head he looked at Aria. even in death, she remained Perfect. He snarled in disgust as he pulled the trigger'
hehehehe. just a thought. It is your story after all :D And you are doing a great job at it. can't wait to read the rest of it! :)
I feel like at the end he should kill himself and then her. and the end should read something like 'as Alex brought the gun to his head he looked at Aria. even in death, she remained Perfect. He snarled in disgust as he pulled the trigger'
hehehehe. just a thought. It is your story after all :D And you are doing a great job at it. can't wait to read the rest of it! :)
4/24/2013 c1 Slytherinjunky
I feel like there are 4 or so possible endings for this story. All of them are promising. :) can't wait to see how it ends :3
I feel like there are 4 or so possible endings for this story. All of them are promising. :) can't wait to see how it ends :3
8/20/2011 c14 leavemeialone
DAMN! This has lots of smut. And, I LOVE IT! I like how possessive Alex is, he really cares for her. He doesn't quite understand his hate in the beginning. But, you know what they say, there is a thin line between love and hate. Aria seems a little weak in the beginning. But, as time goes on, she really does develop some backbone and that is pretty awesome. Chris is jerk. I really like hearing what all the characters are thinking of. It really reveals a lot about them, sweet or horrible things. Even if you never update (which will make me very very sad), I have still very very much enjoyed what this story has so far.
DAMN! This has lots of smut. And, I LOVE IT! I like how possessive Alex is, he really cares for her. He doesn't quite understand his hate in the beginning. But, you know what they say, there is a thin line between love and hate. Aria seems a little weak in the beginning. But, as time goes on, she really does develop some backbone and that is pretty awesome. Chris is jerk. I really like hearing what all the characters are thinking of. It really reveals a lot about them, sweet or horrible things. Even if you never update (which will make me very very sad), I have still very very much enjoyed what this story has so far.
12/27/2010 c14 RyomaPaola
One word. Update. This story has potential to be the Best Rated M in SKoW, but there are a lot of inconsistencies in the major characters. Plot seems to be flawed that the readers feel something random will just appear. There are also problems with grammar, punctuations and villain. Your villain or problem of the whole story changes way too often from character vs character to self vs character to environment vs character back to character vs character. This story has a lot of potential though. It's original, I'll give you that. It may seem like an ordinary Hate-Love Romance Story at first, but it has a certain twist to it. Once again, please update. If you need help, I can try fixing some punctuation and grammar errors for you.
One word. Update. This story has potential to be the Best Rated M in SKoW, but there are a lot of inconsistencies in the major characters. Plot seems to be flawed that the readers feel something random will just appear. There are also problems with grammar, punctuations and villain. Your villain or problem of the whole story changes way too often from character vs character to self vs character to environment vs character back to character vs character. This story has a lot of potential though. It's original, I'll give you that. It may seem like an ordinary Hate-Love Romance Story at first, but it has a certain twist to it. Once again, please update. If you need help, I can try fixing some punctuation and grammar errors for you.
12/20/2009 c14 
6WineAndRoses
Hey I know you havent updated in a while, but it would be awesome if you did!
6WineAndRosesHey I know you havent updated in a while, but it would be awesome if you did!