
2/8/2008 c3
1funky-gg
u r not a crappy writer and this was not a crappy chapter, come to think of it you always say its crappy n its not! n i love harry potter to!

u r not a crappy writer and this was not a crappy chapter, come to think of it you always say its crappy n its not! n i love harry potter to!
9/7/2007 c1 Erica C
hello notageekfreak!
tnks for dedicating it to me!
miss you too
erica
hello notageekfreak!
tnks for dedicating it to me!
miss you too
erica
8/1/2007 c3
1Frenchyesca
Yayy, me likey this chapter.I can't wait for the dance/party chapter. There's usually always something in store when those come up.

Yayy, me likey this chapter.I can't wait for the dance/party chapter. There's usually always something in store when those come up.
8/1/2007 c3
3Westley
aw... I knew Jason didn't intent on it, and wanted to be back with her. I hope Anne with understand soon.
Now, don't doubt yourself of your writing, it doesn't matter how you write, good or bad, you should be doing this for the fun of writing, and enjoying the experiences as you write out these chapters. First of all, I think that you’re a fine writer, and secondly, the story’s great, keep going. But just in my option, maybe you could develop the characters a little bit more? That’s just my point of view, so you don’t have to take it to heart.

aw... I knew Jason didn't intent on it, and wanted to be back with her. I hope Anne with understand soon.
Now, don't doubt yourself of your writing, it doesn't matter how you write, good or bad, you should be doing this for the fun of writing, and enjoying the experiences as you write out these chapters. First of all, I think that you’re a fine writer, and secondly, the story’s great, keep going. But just in my option, maybe you could develop the characters a little bit more? That’s just my point of view, so you don’t have to take it to heart.
8/1/2007 c2 Westley
Wow, he comes back... yet she doesn't even seem to give him a chance to talk. Though I could understand that Anne feels that way after years of remembering what he had done to her. I wonder why he did that.
Wow, he comes back... yet she doesn't even seem to give him a chance to talk. Though I could understand that Anne feels that way after years of remembering what he had done to her. I wonder why he did that.
8/1/2007 c1 Westley
aww...poor little Anne, so young, and already heartbreak.
I'm glad that her mother tried to help her.
:)
aww...poor little Anne, so young, and already heartbreak.
I'm glad that her mother tried to help her.
:)
7/7/2007 c2
7live.in.content
thats a really good chapter, sorry bout the first question on the other chapter review. update soon :)

thats a really good chapter, sorry bout the first question on the other chapter review. update soon :)
7/7/2007 c1 live.in.content
hey, cool story i like the plot and all, one question, how come in the flash back he calls her May? and he name is anne?
hey, cool story i like the plot and all, one question, how come in the flash back he calls her May? and he name is anne?
7/6/2007 c2 em
Great story:D Can't wait for the next chapter:)
Great story:D Can't wait for the next chapter:)
7/4/2007 c1 Samantha
This is a great story from what ive read and can expect great things from it in the future. I plan on reading every chapter til the end
This is a great story from what ive read and can expect great things from it in the future. I plan on reading every chapter til the end
7/2/2007 c1
2Elfish Suicide
This seems like one of the bestest stories I've read. I luv it so much! I'd rather have shorter chapters and quicker updating. So Update Soon! and review my story!

This seems like one of the bestest stories I've read. I luv it so much! I'd rather have shorter chapters and quicker updating. So Update Soon! and review my story!
7/2/2007 c1
2remembrance.of.u-4ever.farewel
vewy nice but please continue in short chapters but contant updating or however u want as long as u type the story and put it here

vewy nice but please continue in short chapters but contant updating or however u want as long as u type the story and put it here