for Back To Our Past5/24/2008 c4 
4Yuura
Interesting...just read your 4 chapters you put up. It's interesting really so I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. (:
4YuuraInteresting...just read your 4 chapters you put up. It's interesting really so I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. (:
5/21/2008 c1 Lady R
This story has an interesting beginning. And it's based on actual dreams that you're having? Wow, that's pretty cool! :)
This story has an interesting beginning. And it's based on actual dreams that you're having? Wow, that's pretty cool! :)
5/20/2008 c3 4nirnas
Ack! You can't leave it there! I can't wait for the next installment. I really love the story, and I wonder what's going to happen next. Keep up the good work! ^-^
4nirnasAck! You can't leave it there! I can't wait for the next installment. I really love the story, and I wonder what's going to happen next. Keep up the good work! ^-^
5/19/2008 c2 5Skylene
oh c'mon c'mon c'mon c'mon plez plez plez plez plez plez plez write another chapter plez
5Skyleneoh c'mon c'mon c'mon c'mon plez plez plez plez plez plez plez write another chapter plez
5/17/2008 c3 Skylene
OMG this is so good i want more
(looks around sheepishly) i'm addicted to it (laughs)
good job keep it coming
OMG this is so good i want more
(looks around sheepishly) i'm addicted to it (laughs)
good job keep it coming
7/3/2007 c3 2mia5081
new reader here lol.
the story is really interesting, the only thing I have to point out is there are a lot of grammatical errors, just little stuff like 'I' should always be capitalized, and a few other things. but other than that, it's really good and I can't wait for more!
update soon!
~Mia
2mia5081new reader here lol.
the story is really interesting, the only thing I have to point out is there are a lot of grammatical errors, just little stuff like 'I' should always be capitalized, and a few other things. but other than that, it's really good and I can't wait for more!
update soon!
~Mia
7/3/2007 c3 19ihrtbks
Aw...they have a love that lasted centuries. I'm sorry I'm being nitpicky, but you have a few uncapitalized i's. I'm confused...is Liam a reincarnation or a ghost?
UPDATE SOON!
19ihrtbksAw...they have a love that lasted centuries. I'm sorry I'm being nitpicky, but you have a few uncapitalized i's. I'm confused...is Liam a reincarnation or a ghost?
UPDATE SOON!
7/2/2007 c2 2dallascity
Hmm, this seems really interesting. I'll definately be keeping an eye out for it.
It's just, the end here... Liam and Natalie already have eachother's phone numbers and such? They just met... and she called him 13 times? and when he called back he knew it was her... I'm sorry I just don't understand that last bit.
But this is definately a very unique story, and I really like it:]
2dallascityHmm, this seems really interesting. I'll definately be keeping an eye out for it.
It's just, the end here... Liam and Natalie already have eachother's phone numbers and such? They just met... and she called him 13 times? and when he called back he knew it was her... I'm sorry I just don't understand that last bit.
But this is definately a very unique story, and I really like it:]
7/2/2007 c2 19ihrtbks
I really love your writing style! It's so...mature. Is the second dream sequence Liam's? You sometimes forget to capitalize the i's in your story, just wanted to let you know. How old is Trevor?
UPDATE SOON!
19ihrtbksI really love your writing style! It's so...mature. Is the second dream sequence Liam's? You sometimes forget to capitalize the i's in your story, just wanted to let you know. How old is Trevor?
UPDATE SOON!
7/2/2007 c1 ihrtbks
Intriguing...so have both of them been like reincarnated, Matthew as Liam and Catherine as Nat or is it just Catherine and Nat? Dreams are so scary sometimes aren't they? Like when they come true.
UPDATE SOON!
Intriguing...so have both of them been like reincarnated, Matthew as Liam and Catherine as Nat or is it just Catherine and Nat? Dreams are so scary sometimes aren't they? Like when they come true.
UPDATE SOON!