11/21/2009 c7 1Edara
No! I really like what you've written so far and I want to know more! Please don't change it!
Thanks ^^ Post more soon though XD
No! I really like what you've written so far and I want to know more! Please don't change it!
Thanks ^^ Post more soon though XD
10/20/2007 c6 6Carmel March
I'm really, truly amazed at how this story is only getting better and better. With every new chapter, I'm even more impressed with your talents as a writer.
Keep up this superly duperly great work!
~Carm~
PS
I'm so very very sorry for not reviewing sooner! It may take me awhile to read and review, but just know that I still am, 'kay? :)
I'm really, truly amazed at how this story is only getting better and better. With every new chapter, I'm even more impressed with your talents as a writer.
Keep up this superly duperly great work!
~Carm~
PS
I'm so very very sorry for not reviewing sooner! It may take me awhile to read and review, but just know that I still am, 'kay? :)
10/6/2007 c5 Carmel March
Sorry! I didn't mean to take so long to review. I had read this when I had had a smidgen of time, but never managed to leave a review. But here I am :)
I can't get over how well this story is put together. It reads so smoothly, and it's so intriguing. This chapter was just as fantastic as the rest of them.
I'll try my best not to take a million kajillion years next time ;)
~Carm~
Sorry! I didn't mean to take so long to review. I had read this when I had had a smidgen of time, but never managed to leave a review. But here I am :)
I can't get over how well this story is put together. It reads so smoothly, and it's so intriguing. This chapter was just as fantastic as the rest of them.
I'll try my best not to take a million kajillion years next time ;)
~Carm~
9/4/2007 c4 Carmel March
Yet another fantastic chapter :)
I'm so sorry for taking so long to review, but I'm so incredibly busy it's hard to even get a chance to check my email.
Keep up the amazing work, and update soon!
~Carm~
Yet another fantastic chapter :)
I'm so sorry for taking so long to review, but I'm so incredibly busy it's hard to even get a chance to check my email.
Keep up the amazing work, and update soon!
~Carm~
8/10/2007 c3 Carmel March
Lovely. I'm really liking the direction this story is going in. And the characters seem to be developing even more. Their feelings and emotions are changing and emerging, making them more realistic, believable characters. Very nicely done.
Update as soon as possible!
~Carm~
Lovely. I'm really liking the direction this story is going in. And the characters seem to be developing even more. Their feelings and emotions are changing and emerging, making them more realistic, believable characters. Very nicely done.
Update as soon as possible!
~Carm~
7/26/2007 c2 Carmel March
Oh, I loved that :) And I absolutely loved that last line. Excellent job on this chapter, and I hope to read more soon!
~carm~
Oh, I loved that :) And I absolutely loved that last line. Excellent job on this chapter, and I hope to read more soon!
~carm~
7/9/2007 c1 Carmel March
That was an excellent start to the story. I'm already quite into the plot and the characters :) Good job, and I can't wait for more!
~carm~
That was an excellent start to the story. I'm already quite into the plot and the characters :) Good job, and I can't wait for more!
~carm~