
8/16/2007 c1 Carly
Umm, well it wasn't the best. I don't really like the cussing... it was kind of pointless and it took away the feeling to it... yeah, umm, it wasn't that good... you might want to edit this. Maybe you'll become a poet one day. Good luck with that!
Umm, well it wasn't the best. I don't really like the cussing... it was kind of pointless and it took away the feeling to it... yeah, umm, it wasn't that good... you might want to edit this. Maybe you'll become a poet one day. Good luck with that!
7/3/2007 c1
31poemkitten7
Ohh. Very original. I like it. Nicely written. :D Keep up the awesome work. -Sara

Ohh. Very original. I like it. Nicely written. :D Keep up the awesome work. -Sara