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11/9/2007 c1 21servatis-a-pereculum
Awesome inspiration! You are extremely talented!
7/29/2007 c1 recycle rhymes
interesting imagery. love love the last lines. nice work.
7/6/2007 c1 322Basara
hahaha! sorry for the laugh... but this one's creative ( in my own opinion of myself at oddity's sake ) sweet!

nice!
7/6/2007 c1 disabled account
M ... tiramisu inspires me too. I love the expression "ladyfinger lust."
7/3/2007 c1 91fairytale failure
I love the power in the lines 'his fingers stick in her hair like cinders'.

The first 5 lines seemed very real, down to earth and dirty.

The last two seemed kind of magic.

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