for Splinter12/24/2007 c1 
79Sorrowful Dreams
a very deep and heartfelt poem. some how...reminds me of something. can't place it though. GREAT WORK!
~Sorrow
79Sorrowful Dreamsa very deep and heartfelt poem. some how...reminds me of something. can't place it though. GREAT WORK!
~Sorrow
10/15/2007 c1 612simpleplan13
I like this... the format is great and I love the ending a lot... great piece
612simpleplan13I like this... the format is great and I love the ending a lot... great piece
7/10/2007 c1 88Icthoid Matro Coselos
ooh... this is a truly unique poem! i love it... the openness is beautiful. keep it up!
88Icthoid Matro Coselosooh... this is a truly unique poem! i love it... the openness is beautiful. keep it up!
7/8/2007 c1 298Moon-Chaser
Wow, this feels very powerful. The way that you decribe it all, the beat of the poem is very fast, almost like panic or uneasiness? Well I like this poem.
Keep it up.
298Moon-ChaserWow, this feels very powerful. The way that you decribe it all, the beat of the poem is very fast, almost like panic or uneasiness? Well I like this poem.
Keep it up.