for Xnay on Angerday, s'il vous plaît7/30/2013 c6 
1P.F Ally
Forget those people who think your writing is ridiculous. I think your writing is fabulous. Your humor is awesome, mmkay. It lays low, but it's funny nonetheless.
1P.F AllyForget those people who think your writing is ridiculous. I think your writing is fabulous. Your humor is awesome, mmkay. It lays low, but it's funny nonetheless.
4/4/2013 c20 mk
I absolutely love this story! This is my tenth time reading it!
I absolutely love this story! This is my tenth time reading it!
3/4/2013 c20 csorciere
I have had so much fun with these. I see that you started Jess' story with Calc, but I noticed that is has been over a year since it was updated and I don't want to get started on it and get hooked like I have been with V, W, and X.
I have truly enjoyed this little world that you have created. It has been a lot of fun and I have laughed quite a bit. Hopefully, one day you will find the time or inspiration to complete Jess' story. In the meantime though, thank you for sharing these stories with us. They are a lot of fun to spend time with.
I have had so much fun with these. I see that you started Jess' story with Calc, but I noticed that is has been over a year since it was updated and I don't want to get started on it and get hooked like I have been with V, W, and X.
I have truly enjoyed this little world that you have created. It has been a lot of fun and I have laughed quite a bit. Hopefully, one day you will find the time or inspiration to complete Jess' story. In the meantime though, thank you for sharing these stories with us. They are a lot of fun to spend time with.
2/6/2013 c20 4R. Ficst
Absolutely adore this story. June is a fantastic character. Your world-building is quite interesting as well. Awesome work, thanks so much for posting!
4R. FicstAbsolutely adore this story. June is a fantastic character. Your world-building is quite interesting as well. Awesome work, thanks so much for posting!
1/21/2013 c20 TheMoltenWindow
Love for this story. Pure love.
It's the second time I've read it in a day :) I hope your happy because you've successfully distracted me from any possible work ;)
Matty may well be my favorite male character on fictionpress or fanfiction, and they're so good as a couple :)
Thank you for posting the story.
Love for this story. Pure love.
It's the second time I've read it in a day :) I hope your happy because you've successfully distracted me from any possible work ;)
Matty may well be my favorite male character on fictionpress or fanfiction, and they're so good as a couple :)
Thank you for posting the story.
8/15/2012 c4 2Redz
"Au revoire, mon pauvre telefone." pauvre goes before telefone. Anyway, good story. I'm enjoying it.
2Redz"Au revoire, mon pauvre telefone." pauvre goes before telefone. Anyway, good story. I'm enjoying it.
7/21/2012 c20 No name
I loved it
I loved it
7/17/2012 c1 3fellintothemoon
Hey there! This is Melissa from ADoR. We've been rewriting all of our old reviews and I've just rewritten yours! Here is your review:
Melissa Thinks: June is different from the normal supernatural creatures we see. She's half vampire half werewolf: a hybrid. Her life seems rather dull, but she seems to get by with her two best friends, Jess, a vampire hunter, and Marguerite, a life witch. When a weird bracelet gets stuck around her wrist, she starts attracting all sorts of trouble; and not the good kind.
I was sucked in from the very beginning of this story. With it's addicting plot and great voice, who wouldn't be attracted to it. Jun was an interesting character to read about. While some stories tend to make their female supernatural characters hardened and tough, June was different. There was actually a scene where she stuttered around a guy she like; that shows how unique she is to this genre. To me, the story never dragged or got tedious as some others do. It was short and satisfying along with funny and imaginative. I absolutely loved the relationship between June and Matt. It was real and although Matt seemed to be a bit cold at first, his character developed and softened out. It's an adventure supernatural story that'll keep you on the edge of your seat with its plot twists and crazy characters.
3fellintothemoonHey there! This is Melissa from ADoR. We've been rewriting all of our old reviews and I've just rewritten yours! Here is your review:
Melissa Thinks: June is different from the normal supernatural creatures we see. She's half vampire half werewolf: a hybrid. Her life seems rather dull, but she seems to get by with her two best friends, Jess, a vampire hunter, and Marguerite, a life witch. When a weird bracelet gets stuck around her wrist, she starts attracting all sorts of trouble; and not the good kind.
I was sucked in from the very beginning of this story. With it's addicting plot and great voice, who wouldn't be attracted to it. Jun was an interesting character to read about. While some stories tend to make their female supernatural characters hardened and tough, June was different. There was actually a scene where she stuttered around a guy she like; that shows how unique she is to this genre. To me, the story never dragged or got tedious as some others do. It was short and satisfying along with funny and imaginative. I absolutely loved the relationship between June and Matt. It was real and although Matt seemed to be a bit cold at first, his character developed and softened out. It's an adventure supernatural story that'll keep you on the edge of your seat with its plot twists and crazy characters.
5/27/2012 c20 salex13
I've recently read all three of your completed stories over the course of a few weeks, so I guess this is more of a review of all of your stories in general.
I am actually very pleasantly surprised by your level of writing. Have you ever considered getting published?
There is a very structured organization to your stories, which is very rare on FictionPress - it's clear you do some level of planning ahead, bravo.
One tiny thing I'd like to point out is that the mannerisms and behaviours and ways of speech of a few of your characters are too similar, especially June and Kate. They seem more like the same person going through two separate adventures. Oh, and some of the french... made me wince a little. :P but that's minor details.
In general, well done. Your stories are original, the plot lines are refreshing and original. The dialogue is very lively and witty, which I enjoyed immensely. And your plot twists are actually very surprising and drives the plot! Well done!
Keep writing. Doesn't have to be on FP, but just keep writing in general. You have great potential.
I've recently read all three of your completed stories over the course of a few weeks, so I guess this is more of a review of all of your stories in general.
I am actually very pleasantly surprised by your level of writing. Have you ever considered getting published?
There is a very structured organization to your stories, which is very rare on FictionPress - it's clear you do some level of planning ahead, bravo.
One tiny thing I'd like to point out is that the mannerisms and behaviours and ways of speech of a few of your characters are too similar, especially June and Kate. They seem more like the same person going through two separate adventures. Oh, and some of the french... made me wince a little. :P but that's minor details.
In general, well done. Your stories are original, the plot lines are refreshing and original. The dialogue is very lively and witty, which I enjoyed immensely. And your plot twists are actually very surprising and drives the plot! Well done!
Keep writing. Doesn't have to be on FP, but just keep writing in general. You have great potential.