for Xnay on Angerday, s'il vous plaît1/6/2011 c9 
1Elaina McKenzie Sharpe
She PUNCHED him! Holy crapola! How could someone do that while being kissed by a guy that HOT! Loved this chapter and laughed out loud at the punch.
1Elaina McKenzie SharpeShe PUNCHED him! Holy crapola! How could someone do that while being kissed by a guy that HOT! Loved this chapter and laughed out loud at the punch.
1/6/2011 c5 Elaina McKenzie Sharpe
Please say that Gabby is his sister and not his girlfriend or wife or someting. That would so put a downer on this story. Other than that, I love it. Matty is an interesting character and I kind of like him. Even if he is a kidnaping, throw-people-off-bridges, silent type.
Please say that Gabby is his sister and not his girlfriend or wife or someting. That would so put a downer on this story. Other than that, I love it. Matty is an interesting character and I kind of like him. Even if he is a kidnaping, throw-people-off-bridges, silent type.
1/3/2011 c20 1Madam Vendetta
wow. Another great one! And guess what! I remembered that "flaw" I told you about earlier. It's not really a flaw it's just... If Vampire men turn into vampires with puberty... then why do most of them seem stuck in their mid-twenties and not their teens?
~BB
1Madam Vendettawow. Another great one! And guess what! I remembered that "flaw" I told you about earlier. It's not really a flaw it's just... If Vampire men turn into vampires with puberty... then why do most of them seem stuck in their mid-twenties and not their teens?
~BB
12/30/2010 c20 1Quiet Chaos
Your story was cute. I loved Matty, and how he was so cold on the outside, but turned out to just be one big 'ole softy. Gabby was pretty awesome, I loved how she was Matty's daughter, that was a brilliant twist. The only thing is that it felt like I was reading the sequel to some other story the whole time-you know, one of those spin-offs that focuses on the other lesser important characters getting their own happily ever afters. I had honestly no idea about the whole vampire/wolf/demon thing because I kept wondering if this one of those stories where the human world knows about the supernatural, or if this whole thing happened in secret and was just badly explained. And if this actually is a sequel to some story, well, you can disregard the sentences above-I just skipped and read number two first (but if it is a sequel, you should say that somewhere, because I have no idea...) But all in all, this was an amazingly creative, and just plain funny, cute story. xD
1Quiet ChaosYour story was cute. I loved Matty, and how he was so cold on the outside, but turned out to just be one big 'ole softy. Gabby was pretty awesome, I loved how she was Matty's daughter, that was a brilliant twist. The only thing is that it felt like I was reading the sequel to some other story the whole time-you know, one of those spin-offs that focuses on the other lesser important characters getting their own happily ever afters. I had honestly no idea about the whole vampire/wolf/demon thing because I kept wondering if this one of those stories where the human world knows about the supernatural, or if this whole thing happened in secret and was just badly explained. And if this actually is a sequel to some story, well, you can disregard the sentences above-I just skipped and read number two first (but if it is a sequel, you should say that somewhere, because I have no idea...) But all in all, this was an amazingly creative, and just plain funny, cute story. xD
12/15/2010 c3 I'mARandomChick
Putain de merde, is actually like fucking shit or something along those lines. Trust me I'm french, and when I swear, it gets very colorful (I mix both languages and all kinds off insults and swearwords :P)
Putain de merde, is actually like fucking shit or something along those lines. Trust me I'm french, and when I swear, it gets very colorful (I mix both languages and all kinds off insults and swearwords :P)
11/2/2010 c20 1Bipolarised
hello
wow, i really enjoyed reading it, it was very amusing and the dialogue is quite funny! especially june.
great job!
1Bipolarisedhello
wow, i really enjoyed reading it, it was very amusing and the dialogue is quite funny! especially june.
great job!
10/15/2010 c20 Alise
Please, please can you begin a story of Jess and Calc? I loved his character throughout all your stories and I really liked reading more of her in this one. I'm sure you've been getting a lot of requests, but please consider... I personally ADORE your writings and I think those two could really make a great addition!
Alise
p.s. I've read all your stories twice now, by the way and they are still just as great! :)
Please, please can you begin a story of Jess and Calc? I loved his character throughout all your stories and I really liked reading more of her in this one. I'm sure you've been getting a lot of requests, but please consider... I personally ADORE your writings and I think those two could really make a great addition!
Alise
p.s. I've read all your stories twice now, by the way and they are still just as great! :)
10/2/2010 c20 person
Idk if you even get on here anymore, but on the off chance that you do I want you to know that your stories are my favorite out of all fictionpress. I copy then down in word and I read them whenever I can, and even though it is two years late I just want to tell you thank you for writing such amazing stories. Your female leads are strong and they don't rely on their males, *cough cough meyer cough cough* and that is a really great aspect to any story. Hopefully at some point you will publish some of your works, and hopefully I will be able to read them. Best of luck to you!
Idk if you even get on here anymore, but on the off chance that you do I want you to know that your stories are my favorite out of all fictionpress. I copy then down in word and I read them whenever I can, and even though it is two years late I just want to tell you thank you for writing such amazing stories. Your female leads are strong and they don't rely on their males, *cough cough meyer cough cough* and that is a really great aspect to any story. Hopefully at some point you will publish some of your works, and hopefully I will be able to read them. Best of luck to you!
9/12/2010 c20 6aControversialSecret
oh thats so cute. I did kinda guess that gabby was his daughter after a little while but I still think its awesome. Also i loved the movie quotes. I do it all the time so it was nice to get your references
anyway very awesome
6aControversialSecretoh thats so cute. I did kinda guess that gabby was his daughter after a little while but I still think its awesome. Also i loved the movie quotes. I do it all the time so it was nice to get your references
anyway very awesome
9/3/2010 c20 C.Turtle
Hey,
This is soo good,
You have good Writing genes...
Keep up the good work.
C.Turtle
Hey,
This is soo good,
You have good Writing genes...
Keep up the good work.
C.Turtle
8/17/2010 c19 marijee
Matty and the gang came to rescue June...so does she think killing herself will release the bracelet and then Matty can heal her? I hope it works! Enjoying.
Matty and the gang came to rescue June...so does she think killing herself will release the bracelet and then Matty can heal her? I hope it works! Enjoying.
8/17/2010 c18 marijee
Make-up sex was good! But they still didn't exchange blood! So I guess the bracelet is really working for June, except that it is also draining her. I wonder why she ended up back in the cavern...there must be something there she needs. Where did she send Matty and Gabby? Back to the hotel? Enjoying the drama!
Make-up sex was good! But they still didn't exchange blood! So I guess the bracelet is really working for June, except that it is also draining her. I wonder why she ended up back in the cavern...there must be something there she needs. Where did she send Matty and Gabby? Back to the hotel? Enjoying the drama!
8/17/2010 c17 marijee
So June has fallen in love with Matty...Yay! Well I can't see them apart, so I am hoping for HEA! Gabby is sweet and those brothers! They are testosterone filled and love to argue with their sister...and are very overprotective! I am enjoying these characters!
So June has fallen in love with Matty...Yay! Well I can't see them apart, so I am hoping for HEA! Gabby is sweet and those brothers! They are testosterone filled and love to argue with their sister...and are very overprotective! I am enjoying these characters!