for Xnay on Angerday, s'il vous plaît6/11/2010 c20 AndromedaVenus
I loved your writing and I loved that you didn't just pass by the sex scenes but you detailed every single one.. and it's great because that's the climax of their chemistry.. and I hate when authors do that.
I loved your writing and I loved that you didn't just pass by the sex scenes but you detailed every single one.. and it's great because that's the climax of their chemistry.. and I hate when authors do that.
5/31/2010 c20 
2LTD88
So, I just finished reading your series. Gotta say, although I absolutely love this one (because Matthias is my fave male lead so far) the story with Marla was my favorite out of all. No idea why, although I think it was her sarcastic attitude.
Anyways, you did a really good job and I love your style of writing. June is my fave female lead, I think, because she seems so real - and I can relate to her also.
2LTD88So, I just finished reading your series. Gotta say, although I absolutely love this one (because Matthias is my fave male lead so far) the story with Marla was my favorite out of all. No idea why, although I think it was her sarcastic attitude.
Anyways, you did a really good job and I love your style of writing. June is my fave female lead, I think, because she seems so real - and I can relate to her also.
5/1/2010 c20 NatashaKaitlyn
I love this story, when i finished it, it made me go aww.
You have such talent. Love it!
I love this story, when i finished it, it made me go aww.
You have such talent. Love it!
4/13/2010 c2 9One Shot Fanatic
OMG! I've read this story a thousand times (probably literally) and I just noticed the foreshadowing of Mattias! O.O Of course, that's kinda the reason I keep reading this story. ... And all of your stories...
I look forward to Magical Equation's next chapter. ^^ Keep Writing!
9One Shot FanaticOMG! I've read this story a thousand times (probably literally) and I just noticed the foreshadowing of Mattias! O.O Of course, that's kinda the reason I keep reading this story. ... And all of your stories...
I look forward to Magical Equation's next chapter. ^^ Keep Writing!
4/10/2010 c20 3The Beauty of Lies
Ahh! I love this story. It's funny, unique.. Awesome . I haven't enjoyed a story this happy in a while. It's been a long time since the female character was someone I could relate to; ya know?
I'm probably ranting; but it's only because I lived the story that much! XP
3The Beauty of LiesAhh! I love this story. It's funny, unique.. Awesome . I haven't enjoyed a story this happy in a while. It's been a long time since the female character was someone I could relate to; ya know?
I'm probably ranting; but it's only because I lived the story that much! XP
3/27/2010 c4 oo
odd and amusing so far...
odd and amusing so far...
3/23/2010 c20 Bubbly Girl
Aw... I really did love all of the chapters even if you didn't like them! :) Great Job! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness!
-Bubbly Girl
Aw... I really did love all of the chapters even if you didn't like them! :) Great Job! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness!
-Bubbly Girl
3/6/2010 c1 Juliet
Hello, there. It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo, the romance site. Your story was nominated and it has now been inducted onto the site. Here's your raving review:
I was drawn to the story from the first few moments-it strays from the cliche ending, and Lulai manages to create a gorgeous aura of emotions between June and Matty. She makes it legit, and well, authentic. There was no fluff throughout the story-and that can be seen as a good thing.
XOXO,
Juliet
adropofromeo[at]yahoo[dot]com
Hello, there. It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo, the romance site. Your story was nominated and it has now been inducted onto the site. Here's your raving review:
I was drawn to the story from the first few moments-it strays from the cliche ending, and Lulai manages to create a gorgeous aura of emotions between June and Matty. She makes it legit, and well, authentic. There was no fluff throughout the story-and that can be seen as a good thing.
XOXO,
Juliet
adropofromeo[at]yahoo[dot]com
2/13/2010 c20 3CruelestSilence
I was going through my favorites and I landed upon this story, not remembering what it was about because it'd been so long ago.
I re-read it and now I remember :3
I originally adored this story because of the emotion that transferred to the reader, you really have a strong understanding of the human mind and empathy. Not to mention you made Matty and June's relationship realistic and completely legit. It seemed real to me instead of being the typical girl's fantasy of a perfect relationship.
Anyway. I'm looking forward to seeing you write more fiction.
3CruelestSilenceI was going through my favorites and I landed upon this story, not remembering what it was about because it'd been so long ago.
I re-read it and now I remember :3
I originally adored this story because of the emotion that transferred to the reader, you really have a strong understanding of the human mind and empathy. Not to mention you made Matty and June's relationship realistic and completely legit. It seemed real to me instead of being the typical girl's fantasy of a perfect relationship.
Anyway. I'm looking forward to seeing you write more fiction.
2/10/2010 c10 TemptedByLaNuit
*bursts out laughing*
Her brothers? Oh, oh that ending is *priceless*! I absolutely love it!
*continues laughing*
*starts reading next chapter*
*bursts out laughing*
Her brothers? Oh, oh that ending is *priceless*! I absolutely love it!
*continues laughing*
*starts reading next chapter*
2/5/2010 c20 toffeema
I've just discovered yours stories and have been inhaling them! Please continue to write here on fictionpress and update!
I've just discovered yours stories and have been inhaling them! Please continue to write here on fictionpress and update!
1/25/2010 c20 kat
fucking awesome. and hilarious.
fucking awesome. and hilarious.
1/24/2010 c20 GinzzzRoxxx
Hey. So I love this one the most out of the three so far, I see you have a fourth but I've decided not to read that until it's done. Something to look forward too :) Love Jess, she's my fav :p and calc would be my second fav. Just sayin'. :)
Also, "He sounded generally angry" do you, by any chance, mean "Hes sounded genuinely angry"?
bye.
Hey. So I love this one the most out of the three so far, I see you have a fourth but I've decided not to read that until it's done. Something to look forward too :) Love Jess, she's my fav :p and calc would be my second fav. Just sayin'. :)
Also, "He sounded generally angry" do you, by any chance, mean "Hes sounded genuinely angry"?
bye.