for Xnay on Angerday, s'il vous plaît1/19/2010 c20 skysthelimit
I have to say, this was truly a great story. I have read so many stories on fictionpress and it's really hard to find a story with a character who is so funny and relatable. And original. And dialogue that is so realistic and unpretentious is rare. There weren't any really stupid, cheesy, fluffy lines. All the characters were so lovable. And the romance between Matty and June was so palpable and wasn't cliched (in a bad way, some cliches are good). And i really enjoyed the story- it put me in a rlly good mood and helped to relieve some stress. Thanks for the story!
I have to say, this was truly a great story. I have read so many stories on fictionpress and it's really hard to find a story with a character who is so funny and relatable. And original. And dialogue that is so realistic and unpretentious is rare. There weren't any really stupid, cheesy, fluffy lines. All the characters were so lovable. And the romance between Matty and June was so palpable and wasn't cliched (in a bad way, some cliches are good). And i really enjoyed the story- it put me in a rlly good mood and helped to relieve some stress. Thanks for the story!
1/10/2010 c20 Striving In Courage
Man this is an awesome read!I kept thinking Gabby was a sister or something Not his daughter but im glad it turned out the way it did ^^ Loved every second :D
xStriving In Couragex
Man this is an awesome read!I kept thinking Gabby was a sister or something Not his daughter but im glad it turned out the way it did ^^ Loved every second :D
xStriving In Couragex
1/9/2010 c20 u wouldjustbe AWESO without ME
aw so cute! ah only if real life had happy endings like this...
aw so cute! ah only if real life had happy endings like this...
1/7/2010 c20 
1likepoisonivy
GAH! Can I have a Matty, please? I just spent hours reading this. It was lovely, and heartbreakingly sweet. I love that June was so relateable, and she was hilarious. Very well done.
1likepoisonivyGAH! Can I have a Matty, please? I just spent hours reading this. It was lovely, and heartbreakingly sweet. I love that June was so relateable, and she was hilarious. Very well done.
1/1/2010 c20 tami
Awesome stories! I like how you incorporated all characters in all three.
Could you please PLEASE do a story about Calc and Jessica. Pweez?
I really want to see them get together!
Great job, btw.
Update for you stories soon!
Happy New Year's.
Awesome stories! I like how you incorporated all characters in all three.
Could you please PLEASE do a story about Calc and Jessica. Pweez?
I really want to see them get together!
Great job, btw.
Update for you stories soon!
Happy New Year's.
12/6/2009 c20 MelodieCC
wow, this story is amazing! i love the plot, i love the characters and their personalities, i love the ending; pretty much everything. great job with the story, you rock!
wow, this story is amazing! i love the plot, i love the characters and their personalities, i love the ending; pretty much everything. great job with the story, you rock!
11/29/2009 c9 MelodieCC
god, i love this story; it's so different than the other ones i've read.
i love June's character and personality. :)
god, i love this story; it's so different than the other ones i've read.
i love June's character and personality. :)
11/25/2009 c6 96Silly Little Storywriter
Geez, I can't even count the amount of times that I have reaad this story, and yet I have only just realised that the people in the cafe were Marla and Callum. So funny.
I like this story a lot, in case you haven't guessed.
Brenna
96Silly Little StorywriterGeez, I can't even count the amount of times that I have reaad this story, and yet I have only just realised that the people in the cafe were Marla and Callum. So funny.
I like this story a lot, in case you haven't guessed.
Brenna
11/22/2009 c20 14eskimoxisses
This is my favorite of your other stories involving vampires/werewolves/witches, y'know the whole enchilada. The plot was more developed, the characters explored out, and I'm so glad you brought it to fictionpress.
Thanks again :)
14eskimoxissesThis is my favorite of your other stories involving vampires/werewolves/witches, y'know the whole enchilada. The plot was more developed, the characters explored out, and I'm so glad you brought it to fictionpress.
Thanks again :)
11/2/2009 c20 Fatima
AWESOME!I loved the story!read it in one day and i couldn't stop! well gotta go and read your other ones, hehe... :D
AWESOME!I loved the story!read it in one day and i couldn't stop! well gotta go and read your other ones, hehe... :D
10/18/2009 c20 konichiwa2u
Oh gee...I was on the verge of tears after completing this story...right now it's 12:42 as still I'm awake. I have school at 8 and I have to wake up at 6 but your story was worth it. A true loving story that touched my heart deeply.
Oh gee...I was on the verge of tears after completing this story...right now it's 12:42 as still I'm awake. I have school at 8 and I have to wake up at 6 but your story was worth it. A true loving story that touched my heart deeply.
10/17/2009 c20 charm en route
Aw, that was soo cute.
I'm glad I understood why June did what she did at the end of the last chapter as soon as she did it. Otherwise I would have been so sad.
Anyway, I don't know why I thought Matty knew about their soulmate status earlier. I guess I noticed how he acted towards her, but obviously he was in denial until now. Whatever. So cute.
I don't really have any constructive criticism right now because I'm all 'aw'. Sorry. :D
Aw, that was soo cute.
I'm glad I understood why June did what she did at the end of the last chapter as soon as she did it. Otherwise I would have been so sad.
Anyway, I don't know why I thought Matty knew about their soulmate status earlier. I guess I noticed how he acted towards her, but obviously he was in denial until now. Whatever. So cute.
I don't really have any constructive criticism right now because I'm all 'aw'. Sorry. :D
10/17/2009 c16 charm en route
Aha! Even though I guess Gabby was his sister earlier, I've been contemplating it and decided that it could also be his daughter. Although I didn't want to guess again so I just left it at that. Either way, I had a triumphant fist in the air.
Lolz.
Aha! Even though I guess Gabby was his sister earlier, I've been contemplating it and decided that it could also be his daughter. Although I didn't want to guess again so I just left it at that. Either way, I had a triumphant fist in the air.
Lolz.
10/17/2009 c12 charm en route
Just in case you were wondering, yes, I did clap when she figured it out.
:p
Just in case you were wondering, yes, I did clap when she figured it out.
:p
10/16/2009 c11 charm en route
Okay, first of all, I'm thinking Gabby is possibly his sister. But I'm also thinking that that's a stretch.
Second of all, either I'm wrong about the whole joined thing (I remember the other term!) or you're just trying to make me think I'm wrong. Either way I'm all sad now. See? - D:
Third of all, I'm really sleepy and so I'm going to finish this story tomorrow. (Not that you really care but I wanted to have three points. Heh.)
Okay, first of all, I'm thinking Gabby is possibly his sister. But I'm also thinking that that's a stretch.
Second of all, either I'm wrong about the whole joined thing (I remember the other term!) or you're just trying to make me think I'm wrong. Either way I'm all sad now. See? - D:
Third of all, I'm really sleepy and so I'm going to finish this story tomorrow. (Not that you really care but I wanted to have three points. Heh.)