for Shipwrck Island7/10/2007 c3 
2Patch72
Pretty good, I enjoyed it. The names were a little cheesey, such as Salior, Honey, and Skipper. But hey, it's your story. I'll be sure and keep an eye out for new chapters. Please R&R my story?
2Patch72Pretty good, I enjoyed it. The names were a little cheesey, such as Salior, Honey, and Skipper. But hey, it's your story. I'll be sure and keep an eye out for new chapters. Please R&R my story?
7/7/2007 c3 KidBomb
I find it hard to believe that they're from Chicago and Miami and they're all white! Other than that, keep it up...
I find it hard to believe that they're from Chicago and Miami and they're all white! Other than that, keep it up...
7/6/2007 c2 11Swiftstriker
This is certainly one of the most origanal stories I've read so far. Keep it up, I'm interested now.
11SwiftstrikerThis is certainly one of the most origanal stories I've read so far. Keep it up, I'm interested now.