for The Coffee Shop11/28/2014 c1 Guest
Super cool. Super sweet. Wonderfully written. *claps*
Super cool. Super sweet. Wonderfully written. *claps*
9/14/2014 c1 
9Incandescently Chelsea
I loved it! And I especially loved the twist; I had a inkling it might make that turn in the middle, but it definitely still made me smile! So sweet; so short. Beautiful!
Chelsea Elizabeth
9Incandescently ChelseaI loved it! And I especially loved the twist; I had a inkling it might make that turn in the middle, but it definitely still made me smile! So sweet; so short. Beautiful!
Chelsea Elizabeth
8/27/2014 c1 Beeskeez
Wow that was perfect.
Absolutely flawless, I have no criticisms to make.
What a beautifully written story.
I didn't even have time to sign in because I needed to tell you immediately how wonderful it was.
Wow that was perfect.
Absolutely flawless, I have no criticisms to make.
What a beautifully written story.
I didn't even have time to sign in because I needed to tell you immediately how wonderful it was.
8/13/2014 c1 Lisa Jones
Wow after I read the ending I read it all over again. Very nice and clever story!
Wow after I read the ending I read it all over again. Very nice and clever story!
7/17/2014 c1 shortwinters219
This is by far my favorite oneshot! Original, short, and sweet. Keep up the good work!
This is by far my favorite oneshot! Original, short, and sweet. Keep up the good work!
6/27/2014 c1 Bipasha
I'm crying. This was lovely. Thank you. Thanks so much for writing.
I'm crying. This was lovely. Thank you. Thanks so much for writing.
5/23/2014 c1 a.brief.dalliance1
Wow, I found this through surfing SKoW and am so glad I clicked the link. This was brilliant, beautifully written and intriguing to the very end. Thank you for sharing this
Wow, I found this through surfing SKoW and am so glad I clicked the link. This was brilliant, beautifully written and intriguing to the very end. Thank you for sharing this
2/7/2014 c1 anacharlie
My 1st reaction when I got to the end was to clutch my chest and go "oh".
I like the way you planted the clues to give away just enough to hint she knew him, but to still get the surprise in the end. I think you did a very good job with this story. Congrats. :)
My 1st reaction when I got to the end was to clutch my chest and go "oh".
I like the way you planted the clues to give away just enough to hint she knew him, but to still get the surprise in the end. I think you did a very good job with this story. Congrats. :)
1/31/2014 c1 chipolata
At first i didn't get what happened. When i re-read, i realized it. Such an amazing story!
At first i didn't get what happened. When i re-read, i realized it. Such an amazing story!