
5/15/2001 c1 CoolMistaria1
Please write a longer story in the same style as this one!
Please write a longer story in the same style as this one!
5/9/2001 c1 estelle
oh, that was GREAT! I'm serious, you have real talent here. you should be an author; I'm sure you could get something published. I really enjoyed reading this. Great plot and descriptions. keep up the great work! @-'-,-
oh, that was GREAT! I'm serious, you have real talent here. you should be an author; I'm sure you could get something published. I really enjoyed reading this. Great plot and descriptions. keep up the great work! @-'-,-
4/20/2001 c1 LinkyBoy
loved it! ^.~
loved it! ^.~
3/29/2001 c1
7Foxx
Ok this one is a first , and the kiss wasnt as good as you are capable of,
but i guess it will suffice , keep writing ;)

Ok this one is a first , and the kiss wasnt as good as you are capable of,
but i guess it will suffice , keep writing ;)
3/27/2001 c1
7Kathryn Angelle
Hm, very good, would be better in a much longer expanded version. Some sentences are confusing to read, but on the whole very very good. Write more!

Hm, very good, would be better in a much longer expanded version. Some sentences are confusing to read, but on the whole very very good. Write more!
3/27/2001 c1
12Doxa Mully
very original and good...i love your writing style...i'd give a suggestion, but i really can't find any flaws in such good work ^_^

very original and good...i love your writing style...i'd give a suggestion, but i really can't find any flaws in such good work ^_^
3/27/2001 c1 Cassandra Elise
great story, I enjoyed it immensely. I have such a deep respect for people who can write mysteries. And Karvic and Tamira are so right for each other, although I do admit I saw them getting together all along! :)
Lexi of LBP
great story, I enjoyed it immensely. I have such a deep respect for people who can write mysteries. And Karvic and Tamira are so right for each other, although I do admit I saw them getting together all along! :)
Lexi of LBP