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10/1/2007 c1 97rust phoenix
I enjoyed reading this. I like the mixing of first and second point of view, although I think you need to add in some more characterizations before I will be able to get a good idea of their personalities and relationship. So far I don't know if I'd have much of an idea of what's going on if it hadn't been for the summary. But if this is meant to be a short first chapter/prologue to get me into the story, it's worked.
7/10/2007 c1 James
I enjoyed this. Ma'am I have missed your shiz over the summa. I WANT TO WORK ON OUR STORY. Oh well. This is very nice, like running naked through a grain field on a white summer morning in the middle of October.
7/8/2007 c1 11A Dark Ray of Hope
this is very interesting, although i did get a little dizzy because of the constant change in point of view, or it just might be that i am reading while very sleepy. haha. in any case, i am looking forward to the nexy chapters, hopefully it can shed some light on my confusion. Ü

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