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8/18/2007 c1 Readingwhiz
Beautiful story. It's one of those that gives me a warm fuzzy feeling.
7/28/2007 c1 30LittleDoe
This has a very good story line and plot. I like how Eden came to Terraelupus by way of reading a book. I would suggest making this a more complete story some time. It seems a little rushed from the time that Eden comes to Blaez to the end of the story. I think it should be as Conri says, "things take time". That time is not felt very well. I am espeacilaly curious about her training period. Who were her teachers? What were they like? How did Eden live during this time in her life?

I like the great wolf character. This is a nice story. I hope you expand upon it. Well done!

Thanks for putting me on your favorite list.

God Bless you.

~LitleDoe

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