for Nocte Yin: A Hero Wannabe?2/19/2008 c17 Arianna
Wow, I was not expecting an update so soon! But it was a very pleasant surprise. Yay!
I love it, but I wish we could have her magic back. When is her magic coming back? They'll need her sooner or later. Mei Feng could make Ramiro give her magic back...
I love that she told them about Farhat. Very funny.
Wow, I was not expecting an update so soon! But it was a very pleasant surprise. Yay!
I love it, but I wish we could have her magic back. When is her magic coming back? They'll need her sooner or later. Mei Feng could make Ramiro give her magic back...
I love that she told them about Farhat. Very funny.
2/19/2008 c17 Wolf-of-Five-Elements
Great chapter, as usual... stupid bracelet, hope Nocte gets it off soon! And update ASAP please!
Great chapter, as usual... stupid bracelet, hope Nocte gets it off soon! And update ASAP please!
2/15/2008 c17 
4Mistress DragonFlame
I'm kinda surprised that Mei Feng didn't outright order the bracelet to be removed, test or not. "What if we really need her at a very important moment, and we can't get it off in time?"
4Mistress DragonFlameI'm kinda surprised that Mei Feng didn't outright order the bracelet to be removed, test or not. "What if we really need her at a very important moment, and we can't get it off in time?"
2/15/2008 c17 Michelle Habibi
Great chapter, but it was kind of a filler, I can't wait till the next update!
Great chapter, but it was kind of a filler, I can't wait till the next update!
2/15/2008 c17 Selena Lyle
This chapter was really well written :)
I liked how you portrayed Aman & Nocte's relationship and how you included more of Farhat.
But the cherry on top of the icing had to be Delano & Nocte snuggling :O
Please update soon!
This chapter was really well written :)
I liked how you portrayed Aman & Nocte's relationship and how you included more of Farhat.
But the cherry on top of the icing had to be Delano & Nocte snuggling :O
Please update soon!
2/15/2008 c17 4Undecided.And.Confused
So much confused emotion! I wonder why Nocre is dreaming of Noir, that bastard. And once again I believe Ramiro should die! Hopefully we'll see more action in the next chapter!
4Undecided.And.ConfusedSo much confused emotion! I wonder why Nocre is dreaming of Noir, that bastard. And once again I believe Ramiro should die! Hopefully we'll see more action in the next chapter!
2/4/2008 c16 Arianna
I love you, I love you, I love you!
Great chapter, but omg, I can't believe Kardos is such a jerk!
And I hate that Ramiro has for some reason reappeared.
But ah, what a great chapter!
Was not expecting an update, so this was wonderful to find!
Great work, again!
I love you, I love you, I love you!
Great chapter, but omg, I can't believe Kardos is such a jerk!
And I hate that Ramiro has for some reason reappeared.
But ah, what a great chapter!
Was not expecting an update, so this was wonderful to find!
Great work, again!
2/3/2008 c16 2pfeiffer
OMG! another battle and poor poor Nocte... how could this team work? when the vindictive bitch Ramiro is there? gr... she deserves to recieve multiple bitch slaps from Nocte... hahaha
until the next update...
2pfeifferOMG! another battle and poor poor Nocte... how could this team work? when the vindictive bitch Ramiro is there? gr... she deserves to recieve multiple bitch slaps from Nocte... hahaha
until the next update...
2/3/2008 c16 8Amethyst Asheryn
Are the heroes going to come around anytime? I really like Kardos and them and it's kinda sad to see them disliking her.
yes! I love this chapter! I don't know why, I just love it...
Stupid Ramiro! Erg!
Update soon...Please?
Ashe
8Amethyst AsherynAre the heroes going to come around anytime? I really like Kardos and them and it's kinda sad to see them disliking her.
yes! I love this chapter! I don't know why, I just love it...
Stupid Ramiro! Erg!
Update soon...Please?
Ashe
2/3/2008 c16 4Morgan Davis
AH! Mei Feng almost died again! holy crap! i hate Ramiro SO much! just kill her off! and hurry for more
4Morgan DavisAH! Mei Feng almost died again! holy crap! i hate Ramiro SO much! just kill her off! and hurry for more
2/2/2008 c16 2Phantos
*giggles* Delano is going to KILL Ramiro. And I will enjoy it oh so much... (stupid bitch).
Yay, major fight scene. It feels like the story is really moving forward.
It wasn't very clear what was happening to Nocte with her Death Glare at the beginning of the chapter. I'm still confused on that part.
More updates, please!
-P
2Phantos*giggles* Delano is going to KILL Ramiro. And I will enjoy it oh so much... (stupid bitch).
Yay, major fight scene. It feels like the story is really moving forward.
It wasn't very clear what was happening to Nocte with her Death Glare at the beginning of the chapter. I'm still confused on that part.
More updates, please!
-P
2/2/2008 c16 Vexivicious
I love this story so much. I hate those bracelets that stop people using their moves lol
I love this story so much. I hate those bracelets that stop people using their moves lol
2/2/2008 c16 abandonnnnned
OK, Ramiro needs to die now. What a spoilt fucking brat! I hope Mei Feng puts Ramiro in her place! When Nocte gets that bracelet off, I hope she does some serious 'you're really crap, Ramiro'. (Don't ask me exactly how one does that, I don't think I'm making sense.)
I love you, I love your story, and I'd sell my neighbor's kid into slavery if you'd update again soon!
OK, Ramiro needs to die now. What a spoilt fucking brat! I hope Mei Feng puts Ramiro in her place! When Nocte gets that bracelet off, I hope she does some serious 'you're really crap, Ramiro'. (Don't ask me exactly how one does that, I don't think I'm making sense.)
I love you, I love your story, and I'd sell my neighbor's kid into slavery if you'd update again soon!