for Nocte Yin: A Hero Wannabe?7/14/2007 c2 abandonnnnned
Loved it! I love the relationship between Nocte and Necrosis, and I enjoyed her indignant reaction at the moth. I love the fact that her family was worried, and also what will happen with Umbra and his multi-wife problem! Am very excited now the story is underway! -jumps up and down-
Loved it! I love the relationship between Nocte and Necrosis, and I enjoyed her indignant reaction at the moth. I love the fact that her family was worried, and also what will happen with Umbra and his multi-wife problem! Am very excited now the story is underway! -jumps up and down-
7/14/2007 c2 LisetteF
I had almost forgotten how much fun it is to read Nocte, thanks for posting!
looking forward to reading the next chap
I had almost forgotten how much fun it is to read Nocte, thanks for posting!
looking forward to reading the next chap
7/14/2007 c2 Vexianeedegorarose
I loved the quote for the first chapter, I don't think any quote could top it.
Something about any of the Nocte stories just grabs instantly and holds. Plus theres nothing better to come back to from a long day at the zoo- Could there be a mass stuffed toy killing? They really hate me at work lol.
I reread the first chapter seems a lot better almost completely different to me but I have a bad memory. Noctes gunna get her braces take off before me too! I have a tightening on Monday.. Evil orthadontist! Wo Waiting for the next awesomely amazing chappy!
I loved the quote for the first chapter, I don't think any quote could top it.
Something about any of the Nocte stories just grabs instantly and holds. Plus theres nothing better to come back to from a long day at the zoo- Could there be a mass stuffed toy killing? They really hate me at work lol.
I reread the first chapter seems a lot better almost completely different to me but I have a bad memory. Noctes gunna get her braces take off before me too! I have a tightening on Monday.. Evil orthadontist! Wo Waiting for the next awesomely amazing chappy!
7/14/2007 c2 I.F
I'm SO glad the next part of the story is up, and it's updating so fast! This is GREAT!
I'm SO glad the next part of the story is up, and it's updating so fast! This is GREAT!
7/13/2007 c2 Arianna
Yay! I love nice, long, beautiful chapters like this one! I like it all, but it leaves a lot of questions up in the air. Questions that we need answers to.
You know what I'm getting at...
Update soon!
(Please)
Yay! I love nice, long, beautiful chapters like this one! I like it all, but it leaves a lot of questions up in the air. Questions that we need answers to.
You know what I'm getting at...
Update soon!
(Please)
7/13/2007 c2 
4Mistress DragonFlame
Hm, Nocte must be strong to defeat Pain's sister as easy as that. Good for her!
I also re-read the first chapter, and I agree with it working better.
4Mistress DragonFlameHm, Nocte must be strong to defeat Pain's sister as easy as that. Good for her!
I also re-read the first chapter, and I agree with it working better.
7/13/2007 c2 Wolf-of-Five-Elements
nice chapt! ^^ please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens! I wonder where they're going though...
nice chapt! ^^ please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens! I wonder where they're going though...
7/13/2007 c2 Selena Lyle
Yay, it's an action-packed chappie. TY for updating so soon and on Friday 13th too :o Was that intentional? xD Anyways, I am looking forward to the next chapter and I am so going for Nocte&Paine right now :D
Yay, it's an action-packed chappie. TY for updating so soon and on Friday 13th too :o Was that intentional? xD Anyways, I am looking forward to the next chapter and I am so going for Nocte&Paine right now :D
7/13/2007 c2 4Undecided.And.Confused
I like how frank they are with each other: yeah I'll keep you alve but just so we can use each other! ^-^ You seemed to be switching from third to first person, that was interesting. And ah, what kind of quotes do you want like hero and villain quotes?
4Undecided.And.ConfusedI like how frank they are with each other: yeah I'll keep you alve but just so we can use each other! ^-^ You seemed to be switching from third to first person, that was interesting. And ah, what kind of quotes do you want like hero and villain quotes?
7/13/2007 c2 2moon eclipse shadows
Ah, this chapter went by so fast. ;_;
“Hm,” Melantha scoffed. “You think a shiny weapon will defeat me?”
That made me smile, the fact that Melantha acknowledged the shininess of the dagger.
Oh, yay! The moth has a name. Lucinda. That's a nice name. ~^.^~
Slightly random change of subject. I really like all the names you have in these stories. End of random subject change.
Paine...I'm unsure of. But I'm sure I will find out more about him someday.
2moon eclipse shadowsAh, this chapter went by so fast. ;_;
“Hm,” Melantha scoffed. “You think a shiny weapon will defeat me?”
That made me smile, the fact that Melantha acknowledged the shininess of the dagger.
Oh, yay! The moth has a name. Lucinda. That's a nice name. ~^.^~
Slightly random change of subject. I really like all the names you have in these stories. End of random subject change.
Paine...I'm unsure of. But I'm sure I will find out more about him someday.
7/8/2007 c1 aneedegorarosevexi
YES YES YES!
It was a long day at my job at the Zoo and I now hate little kids and stuffed animals but i checked the time to go home and realised the date was 7-7-7 and I remembered almost instantly why that day was important!
More Nocte!
MORE GREATNESS.
Wonderful start I'm just hooked Al over again
YES YES YES!
It was a long day at my job at the Zoo and I now hate little kids and stuffed animals but i checked the time to go home and realised the date was 7-7-7 and I remembered almost instantly why that day was important!
More Nocte!
MORE GREATNESS.
Wonderful start I'm just hooked Al over again
7/8/2007 c1 4Cold Starfire
Yes!Finally! More Nocte! Thank you thank you thank you! I hope you continue to write this series and I hope you can get it published because it is awesome.
4Cold StarfireYes!Finally! More Nocte! Thank you thank you thank you! I hope you continue to write this series and I hope you can get it published because it is awesome.
7/8/2007 c1 abandonnnnned
Hooray! Nocte again! I assume this was just an introduction chapter, it was short and more well, introductry.
"I don’t know what to write now.
I don’t think I can bare to right more."
I was wondering if the second 'right' was meant to be 'Write'?
I can't wait for more!
Hooray! Nocte again! I assume this was just an introduction chapter, it was short and more well, introductry.
"I don’t know what to write now.
I don’t think I can bare to right more."
I was wondering if the second 'right' was meant to be 'Write'?
I can't wait for more!
7/7/2007 c1 Selena Lyle
Imagine my surprise when I found an e-mail, saying Nocte Yin: The Fourth Installment was finally here! I was quick to jump for joy and then grab some cookies and a coke and read read read. It was short, but I was very happy to see Nocte again! Please, update as son as possible. I'm dying to know where everyone is :D
looking forward to the next chappie,
Imagine my surprise when I found an e-mail, saying Nocte Yin: The Fourth Installment was finally here! I was quick to jump for joy and then grab some cookies and a coke and read read read. It was short, but I was very happy to see Nocte again! Please, update as son as possible. I'm dying to know where everyone is :D
looking forward to the next chappie,
7/7/2007 c1 2moon eclipse shadows
I was so happy when I saw the alert for this! Your stories are so amazing! Bob the dust bunny. Yes, he must be a lovely companion. (But the moth doesn't have a name? It must feel neglected) Ah, I noticed a couple of things...
Well, at the part where it mentions Bob the dust bunny, it says: 'It kinda did, considering that the moth (and Bob the dust bunny in the corner) had been her faithful companion for the last week or more.' That should be "companions" right? And it Gash's letter: 'I don’t think I can bare to right more.' Shouldn't "right" be "write"?
I look forward to the next chapter!
2moon eclipse shadowsI was so happy when I saw the alert for this! Your stories are so amazing! Bob the dust bunny. Yes, he must be a lovely companion. (But the moth doesn't have a name? It must feel neglected) Ah, I noticed a couple of things...
Well, at the part where it mentions Bob the dust bunny, it says: 'It kinda did, considering that the moth (and Bob the dust bunny in the corner) had been her faithful companion for the last week or more.' That should be "companions" right? And it Gash's letter: 'I don’t think I can bare to right more.' Shouldn't "right" be "write"?
I look forward to the next chapter!