for Kylie Morrison: Untouchable7/2/2011 c1 Zaina Anastacia
Ummm...why do the rest of the chapters say that grandmother runs fast if you use fire? Yeah, just wondering. The first chapter is great though.
Ummm...why do the rest of the chapters say that grandmother runs fast if you use fire? Yeah, just wondering. The first chapter is great though.
11/5/2009 c59 Kelly-Green
that's IT? No way! You have to finish it! That ending sucked! she's supposed to get a stupid happily ever after and Wes is supposed to grow a heart. I thought he thought Rachel was annoying! And if Wes doesn't grow a heart then there's supposed to be some random new guy who walked straight out of Cinderella and sweeps Kyle off her feet. And if you don't want to go with the usual spiel then don't or whatever but you have to post more! How can you finish a fifty nine chapter long story with a tearfest at a Winter Formal? Kyle is stronger then that, she's better then that and so is Christina.
Please?
that's IT? No way! You have to finish it! That ending sucked! she's supposed to get a stupid happily ever after and Wes is supposed to grow a heart. I thought he thought Rachel was annoying! And if Wes doesn't grow a heart then there's supposed to be some random new guy who walked straight out of Cinderella and sweeps Kyle off her feet. And if you don't want to go with the usual spiel then don't or whatever but you have to post more! How can you finish a fifty nine chapter long story with a tearfest at a Winter Formal? Kyle is stronger then that, she's better then that and so is Christina.
Please?
10/1/2009 c59 BDE
Huh,
well,
POST THE SHIT.
... Please?
Huh,
well,
POST THE SHIT.
... Please?
5/4/2009 c59 Kjersti
This story is really good. Your characters are well thought out and recognisable, and the plot is touching. It flows a bit badly, though. The junior year chapters feel a bit rushed and aimless. I was surprised at where you ended it, too. It was rather abrupt. But if you thought of continuing the story, that's understandable...
Anyway. I loved this story - especially Kylie, of course. She's so sweet and confused.
This story is really good. Your characters are well thought out and recognisable, and the plot is touching. It flows a bit badly, though. The junior year chapters feel a bit rushed and aimless. I was surprised at where you ended it, too. It was rather abrupt. But if you thought of continuing the story, that's understandable...
Anyway. I loved this story - especially Kylie, of course. She's so sweet and confused.
4/21/2009 c59 anne
you mentioned under your AN that "it's supposed to continue" i do hope you continue or add a continuation on chapter 59. it feels rushed in a way. but nonetheless, i always could count on your stories to crack me up! so thank you! =D
you mentioned under your AN that "it's supposed to continue" i do hope you continue or add a continuation on chapter 59. it feels rushed in a way. but nonetheless, i always could count on your stories to crack me up! so thank you! =D
1/10/2009 c59 sarah
will you ever finish? i no it says complete, but it just doesnt... look like it is. i mean, there are so many lose ends. if u arent going to write anymore could you at least writ out what happens.
ah! the suspense kills me.
will you ever finish? i no it says complete, but it just doesnt... look like it is. i mean, there are so many lose ends. if u arent going to write anymore could you at least writ out what happens.
ah! the suspense kills me.
11/28/2008 c59 Jeanie
you will write more oneday? this is probbaly the best story out of the ones you've written.
sad that you havent updated in a while. its got real heart.
you will write more oneday? this is probbaly the best story out of the ones you've written.
sad that you havent updated in a while. its got real heart.
9/25/2008 c59 
2TishDaFish
Wow. I am liking this story, and a bonus is it is LONG, you can never find any good long stories on FP anymore, so I am very happy ^^
Can't wait for the next chapter, your writing and plots are great =D!
2TishDaFishWow. I am liking this story, and a bonus is it is LONG, you can never find any good long stories on FP anymore, so I am very happy ^^
Can't wait for the next chapter, your writing and plots are great =D!
8/5/2008 c57 unamused
don't bother updating if your stories aren't going anywhere. i don't mean to sound harsh, but never really happens in yours. you really need to think up some kind of plot or even an event, or maybe your writing is just boring and you should go away for a while and come back when you're a lot more skilled?
don't bother updating if your stories aren't going anywhere. i don't mean to sound harsh, but never really happens in yours. you really need to think up some kind of plot or even an event, or maybe your writing is just boring and you should go away for a while and come back when you're a lot more skilled?
8/2/2008 c1 24Spiffalicious
Okay, seriously I read the summary (where it said something about a girl who wasn't 5 foot yet) and I thought of myself. Because I am rather short also.
So...it's kinda interesting so far. Idk, it seems almost hard to read a story about a high school cause they generally are always so cliche. Which I really hate. This one isn't that bad so far.
I'm hoping something more interesting happens in the next chapters, or else this isn't really going anywhere.
But of course I'll keep reading.
24SpiffaliciousOkay, seriously I read the summary (where it said something about a girl who wasn't 5 foot yet) and I thought of myself. Because I am rather short also.
So...it's kinda interesting so far. Idk, it seems almost hard to read a story about a high school cause they generally are always so cliche. Which I really hate. This one isn't that bad so far.
I'm hoping something more interesting happens in the next chapters, or else this isn't really going anywhere.
But of course I'll keep reading.
7/29/2008 c59 1Missus Finkle
I hope you do get round to updating soon, lol, but it's understandable that it may take some time if you're doing a re-write. I really want to know who's sending Kyle the roses; I'm stuck not knowing whether or not I *want* it to be Wes or not...
I just want Kylie to be happy =[
Lol, I'm such a fangirl.
Anyway, awesome so far !
~ Missus Finkle xx
1Missus FinkleI hope you do get round to updating soon, lol, but it's understandable that it may take some time if you're doing a re-write. I really want to know who's sending Kyle the roses; I'm stuck not knowing whether or not I *want* it to be Wes or not...
I just want Kylie to be happy =[
Lol, I'm such a fangirl.
Anyway, awesome so far !
~ Missus Finkle xx
7/27/2008 c59 teddy
what? not finish? plz dont stop posting the story...(i have nothing else to do) i want to finish it
what? not finish? plz dont stop posting the story...(i have nothing else to do) i want to finish it
7/26/2008 c59 Catdog-runs-fast
What a depressing end! Don't write anymore if it is likely to not be as good as what you have alreday written.
What a depressing end! Don't write anymore if it is likely to not be as good as what you have alreday written.
7/18/2008 c59 Guest
Shelley had her hair put up in a bun. It was shiny.
oh, goody.
Shelley had her hair put up in a bun. It was shiny.
oh, goody.
7/16/2008 c59 4jammi
Dude, not cool. LOL, way to end it on a massively depressing angsty ass note. I mean, on one hand it's great that she finally figured out that she liked Wes, on the other hand, major break down middle of a dance, that's so sad. I mean, she didn't even get a chance to dance and have a bit of fun before her little break down.
Then again, I guess if you go to a dance feeling inferior to everyone there and the guy you like [who's also your best friend] and is dating someone gorgeous you have a right to feel depressed. Especially since, you know, you may have had a chance at him. I do have to give Kylie that, even though she's ubersensitive and still hasn't grown to like herself, she rarely looks back at her past behaviour just to have something to moan about. Like in general, yeah she gets whiney, but it's always relevant. And where the hell is her secret admirer? All that build up and he didn't even ask her out. Although now I'm thinking Wes did it to help boost her self-esteem but then again he didn't seem pissed off when the flowers got confiscated and she said the writing was wrong. Oh well.
She needs to look on the plus side for herself though, like, she's cute [from the comments we can gather] when she's dressed in her baggy stuff and she cleans up nicely. AND if she kisses someone it won't be like making out with a drinking fountain. That is so gross. I don't care how hot you are, you kiss like a dog, slobber everywhere, it's over.
She really needs to do something to change if she doesn't like where she is, but at the same time, she shouldn't sell out herself like Wendy did and I think that's her problem. She wants to fit in, she doesn't like the way people see her, but she doesn't know how to change that and so she's always left behind.
4jammiDude, not cool. LOL, way to end it on a massively depressing angsty ass note. I mean, on one hand it's great that she finally figured out that she liked Wes, on the other hand, major break down middle of a dance, that's so sad. I mean, she didn't even get a chance to dance and have a bit of fun before her little break down.
Then again, I guess if you go to a dance feeling inferior to everyone there and the guy you like [who's also your best friend] and is dating someone gorgeous you have a right to feel depressed. Especially since, you know, you may have had a chance at him. I do have to give Kylie that, even though she's ubersensitive and still hasn't grown to like herself, she rarely looks back at her past behaviour just to have something to moan about. Like in general, yeah she gets whiney, but it's always relevant. And where the hell is her secret admirer? All that build up and he didn't even ask her out. Although now I'm thinking Wes did it to help boost her self-esteem but then again he didn't seem pissed off when the flowers got confiscated and she said the writing was wrong. Oh well.
She needs to look on the plus side for herself though, like, she's cute [from the comments we can gather] when she's dressed in her baggy stuff and she cleans up nicely. AND if she kisses someone it won't be like making out with a drinking fountain. That is so gross. I don't care how hot you are, you kiss like a dog, slobber everywhere, it's over.
She really needs to do something to change if she doesn't like where she is, but at the same time, she shouldn't sell out herself like Wendy did and I think that's her problem. She wants to fit in, she doesn't like the way people see her, but she doesn't know how to change that and so she's always left behind.