for Communiqué7/9/2007 c1 
6Le Tranquille
This was a very good story, however there were a lot of punctuation errors, but that didnt even take away from the story. Good job. Can you read my story: That boy on a bike? I need input on it and would like to see what you think about it. Thanks.
Until Always,
A-xx
6Le TranquilleThis was a very good story, however there were a lot of punctuation errors, but that didnt even take away from the story. Good job. Can you read my story: That boy on a bike? I need input on it and would like to see what you think about it. Thanks.
Until Always,
A-xx