for Not supposed to7/26/2011 c47 Fumiki
The love of my frickin life! Thank god you finally updated! I squealed when I saw this and I was like FINALLY! I am EXTATIC! Thank you for updating!
LOL who would have thought that Uri could beat Shawn in dirty talk match? I laughing so hard.. The end of this chapter kinda made me squirmed in my seat... What Shawn's reaction going to be? Oh my god.. Please update faster! I'm dying here...
The love of my frickin life! Thank god you finally updated! I squealed when I saw this and I was like FINALLY! I am EXTATIC! Thank you for updating!
LOL who would have thought that Uri could beat Shawn in dirty talk match? I laughing so hard.. The end of this chapter kinda made me squirmed in my seat... What Shawn's reaction going to be? Oh my god.. Please update faster! I'm dying here...
7/26/2011 c47 
17JtheChosen1
Excellent work here! A lot happened for Uri and I'm glad somethings got easier for him, and how other things became more difficult, like Shawn and Kyle popping up - and I wonder if he'll be making another return, especially with him still being an apparent closet case.
Keep up the great work - I can't wait to see how things play out in the next chapter!
17JtheChosen1Excellent work here! A lot happened for Uri and I'm glad somethings got easier for him, and how other things became more difficult, like Shawn and Kyle popping up - and I wonder if he'll be making another return, especially with him still being an apparent closet case.
Keep up the great work - I can't wait to see how things play out in the next chapter!
7/11/2011 c46 Endoftheclassic
Ok so I usually don't comment. I have on live journal Aton but on here i haven't found something to comment on.
So here is what I have to say ILOVE YOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOU and this story! I read a million stories. Oneshots,long chattered, short chaptered and none! Have ever captured me like this. I was so engrossed in it I didn't move till I was forced to leave. It was great! I love it even though it's not finished I really cried because it isn't finished. Wish it could go on forever. And your English was pretty good. You did have a few mess ups but think you did perfect! And this may be an overly excited comment but I don't care I am letting you know this is my favorite story and I am sharing the love and my love for it. You are a great writer. I love how real you got the characters. Rane, uri, and shown! They seemed so real. I felt like I was in the story. Ok I really should end this now. Sorry its so long! But again you are amazing. Love, random obsessed reader slash poet in training haha
Ok so I usually don't comment. I have on live journal Aton but on here i haven't found something to comment on.
So here is what I have to say ILOVE YOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOU and this story! I read a million stories. Oneshots,long chattered, short chaptered and none! Have ever captured me like this. I was so engrossed in it I didn't move till I was forced to leave. It was great! I love it even though it's not finished I really cried because it isn't finished. Wish it could go on forever. And your English was pretty good. You did have a few mess ups but think you did perfect! And this may be an overly excited comment but I don't care I am letting you know this is my favorite story and I am sharing the love and my love for it. You are a great writer. I love how real you got the characters. Rane, uri, and shown! They seemed so real. I felt like I was in the story. Ok I really should end this now. Sorry its so long! But again you are amazing. Love, random obsessed reader slash poet in training haha
6/30/2011 c46 Fumiki
PLEASE UPDATE! I read this story last year, and I keep checking to see if you're updating or there's something wrong with the story alert, but noo! Don't be mean and leave us hanging here! I want to know what's going to happen between Uri and Shawn!
PLEASE UPDATE! I read this story last year, and I keep checking to see if you're updating or there's something wrong with the story alert, but noo! Don't be mean and leave us hanging here! I want to know what's going to happen between Uri and Shawn!
6/30/2011 c46 animelover2day
;_; Just when things seem to be going well, I find out this isn't a complete story... Oh my, I hope the wait for the next chapter isn't too long. *nervous* This is one of the best stories ever. All the characters are so alive and real to me. I've loved every moment reading this enriching story. I've read until my eyes have become bloodshot. You have had enough surprises in this story to keep me hooked. I just want more and more. Yeah when I was getting toward the end, I was like, this can't be ending this soon and of course I'm right. I am very happy about that, but now have to wait God knows how long. . I just hope I timed it right and you will be updating any day now. I really love your story, it so deserves to be published, I would most certainly buy a copy. I'll be waiting for the next update, until then!
;_; Just when things seem to be going well, I find out this isn't a complete story... Oh my, I hope the wait for the next chapter isn't too long. *nervous* This is one of the best stories ever. All the characters are so alive and real to me. I've loved every moment reading this enriching story. I've read until my eyes have become bloodshot. You have had enough surprises in this story to keep me hooked. I just want more and more. Yeah when I was getting toward the end, I was like, this can't be ending this soon and of course I'm right. I am very happy about that, but now have to wait God knows how long. . I just hope I timed it right and you will be updating any day now. I really love your story, it so deserves to be published, I would most certainly buy a copy. I'll be waiting for the next update, until then!
6/20/2011 c46 CrowleyIsland
PLEASE,PLEASE, PLEASE finish this story. I have been waiting since since October 2010 for the next chapter.
PLEASE,PLEASE, PLEASE finish this story. I have been waiting since since October 2010 for the next chapter.
6/19/2011 c46 CrimsonBlake
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THIS!
I didn't realise that it wasn't complete until I was on the penultimate chapter, and I got seriously upset when I did. fjgfhhdshh PLEASE UPDATE I WILL LOVE YOU FOREVER IF YOU DO.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THIS!
I didn't realise that it wasn't complete until I was on the penultimate chapter, and I got seriously upset when I did. fjgfhhdshh PLEASE UPDATE I WILL LOVE YOU FOREVER IF YOU DO.
6/14/2011 c46 Jamie
I am begging you, please update. Your story is wonderful and funny and sad and suspenseful and most if not all of your cliffhangers are torturous to the mind, so please please update.
I am begging you, please update. Your story is wonderful and funny and sad and suspenseful and most if not all of your cliffhangers are torturous to the mind, so please please update.
6/14/2011 c10 ArryThomson
I KNOW WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN WITH THE CEREAL THING. Or at least I hope I do because that would be really good :-)
I KNOW WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN WITH THE CEREAL THING. Or at least I hope I do because that would be really good :-)
6/3/2011 c46 1mid-eul
I'm willing to do some serious begging, but for now-please, PLEASE update this story. It is incredible, and I just know I'm going to have a hard time sleeping now that I haven't a clue what happens next between these two.
1mid-eulI'm willing to do some serious begging, but for now-please, PLEASE update this story. It is incredible, and I just know I'm going to have a hard time sleeping now that I haven't a clue what happens next between these two.
5/12/2011 c22 OMG
YOU AWFUL BITCH! I was so convinced that the first part was real where they were making out and then you tricked me! I AM SO ANGRY WITH YOU RIGHT NOW!
I LOVE this story and you are simply fantastic and Urial is an awesome name and an awesome person and character and you are just wonderful :D
YOU AWFUL BITCH! I was so convinced that the first part was real where they were making out and then you tricked me! I AM SO ANGRY WITH YOU RIGHT NOW!
I LOVE this story and you are simply fantastic and Urial is an awesome name and an awesome person and character and you are just wonderful :D
5/1/2011 c1 1SpiritStand
HOLY SHIT! This is the first story i ever read on here months ago and lately i've been thinking about it. What a fuckin coincedence right? I was simongirl...Geez i love this story
1SpiritStandHOLY SHIT! This is the first story i ever read on here months ago and lately i've been thinking about it. What a fuckin coincedence right? I was simongirl...Geez i love this story
4/23/2011 c46 jayyluvr28
Holy hell you need to update! I'm in love with this story! I think its time for Uri and Shawn to do a little smooching. Hopefully Shawn goes back to his old perverted self. Update... Please!
Holy hell you need to update! I'm in love with this story! I think its time for Uri and Shawn to do a little smooching. Hopefully Shawn goes back to his old perverted self. Update... Please!
4/17/2011 c46 ka-boom-ka-boom
i love this story and I will die if I don't find out what happens.so please update soon :)
i love this story and I will die if I don't find out what happens.so please update soon :)