for Red Dawn7/27/2007 c1 
50Ariel of Wonderland
Hey, this was actually really good. ...Ariel got stabbed...*pulls collar*...um, okay then. (Note to self: Never ever tick her off...) I think my favorite line would easily have to be
"“So it begins…”
“What?” Evan said curiously.
Michelle sighed.
“Evan, you just ruined a very dramatic moment.”"
It was perfect. I really really liked it. (It was all really over a basketball game? People are weird.)
Good job, hunny!
50Ariel of WonderlandHey, this was actually really good. ...Ariel got stabbed...*pulls collar*...um, okay then. (Note to self: Never ever tick her off...) I think my favorite line would easily have to be
"“So it begins…”
“What?” Evan said curiously.
Michelle sighed.
“Evan, you just ruined a very dramatic moment.”"
It was perfect. I really really liked it. (It was all really over a basketball game? People are weird.)
Good job, hunny!