for Kings, Unicorns, and Ballpoint Pens7/23/2007 c1 
108Qzie
*Laughs* I was laughing all the way through this. LOVED the beginning. "It was really a surprise when Snowsoot declared war on the kingdom of Squin." What great names! You know, it kind of reminds me of a slightly demented children's story. Especially the whole "Hubert and Oliver didn't know what colour his eyes were, being as if you look into the eyes of a Unicorn you suddenly have a strong urge to hurl yourself off a cliff, and all." It was really funny. There were a few grammar errors, but nothing too distracting. Well-done! :D
108Qzie*Laughs* I was laughing all the way through this. LOVED the beginning. "It was really a surprise when Snowsoot declared war on the kingdom of Squin." What great names! You know, it kind of reminds me of a slightly demented children's story. Especially the whole "Hubert and Oliver didn't know what colour his eyes were, being as if you look into the eyes of a Unicorn you suddenly have a strong urge to hurl yourself off a cliff, and all." It was really funny. There were a few grammar errors, but nothing too distracting. Well-done! :D
7/17/2007 c1 12Draketeeth
"The kingdom was very law abiding, as King Hubert could tell when anyone was lying, except when he was especially drunk." Heehee, that's funny.
"“Yes?” said the great Unicorn." You could use something stronger here than just "Yes?". It's a weak opening line for an important meeting.
This was a cute story. I laughed most of the way through it. Well done.
Also, thank you for the reviews.
12Draketeeth"The kingdom was very law abiding, as King Hubert could tell when anyone was lying, except when he was especially drunk." Heehee, that's funny.
"“Yes?” said the great Unicorn." You could use something stronger here than just "Yes?". It's a weak opening line for an important meeting.
This was a cute story. I laughed most of the way through it. Well done.
Also, thank you for the reviews.
7/12/2007 c1 463All Alone With Her Thoughts
Can't say this is my favourite, but it did make me smile - which is a really good thing. ^^
Gosh, I just read your profile and thanks for the shout out to me. I'm flattered. *blushes*
Rowan.
463All Alone With Her ThoughtsCan't say this is my favourite, but it did make me smile - which is a really good thing. ^^
Gosh, I just read your profile and thanks for the shout out to me. I'm flattered. *blushes*
Rowan.