
3/28/2008 c2
2Rai van Rossum
This is quite clever- I'm pleased I finally got around to reading it. It's very good! Anyways, I got back from vacation, so call if you wanna talk.
PS- Are you still writing this? Because I'm going to read it all anyway, but if you abandoned it, I might be a little p*ed off if I get too attached to the characters.
xoxo

This is quite clever- I'm pleased I finally got around to reading it. It's very good! Anyways, I got back from vacation, so call if you wanna talk.
PS- Are you still writing this? Because I'm going to read it all anyway, but if you abandoned it, I might be a little p*ed off if I get too attached to the characters.
xoxo
8/9/2007 c7
6Carmel March
I'm loving this story so far. Very cleverly done :) Keep up the great work, and I can't wait for more!
~Carm~

I'm loving this story so far. Very cleverly done :) Keep up the great work, and I can't wait for more!
~Carm~
8/9/2007 c7
2Princess Narcotic
The story is coming along brilliantly. Though there are a few mistakes, it does not dredge away from the story. Keep going, it's intruiging, interesting and enjoyable!

The story is coming along brilliantly. Though there are a few mistakes, it does not dredge away from the story. Keep going, it's intruiging, interesting and enjoyable!
8/8/2007 c5
9Vampire Queen 13
Good so far, but I think lots of people won't be interested in the life story of the Grim Reaper (since that's essentially who Aod is). I like it though.

Good so far, but I think lots of people won't be interested in the life story of the Grim Reaper (since that's essentially who Aod is). I like it though.
7/12/2007 c5
2Princess Narcotic
All the characters in this are so sweet and pleasant and natural, especially considering who they are and the power they have. I love Aod, he just accepts everything. And God, 'coz she's female. Haha

All the characters in this are so sweet and pleasant and natural, especially considering who they are and the power they have. I love Aod, he just accepts everything. And God, 'coz she's female. Haha
7/11/2007 c4 nolongeraround
I'm amused. He's obsessed with cats? That's funny. I like the relationship between God and the Prince of Darkness. It makes me laugh.
I'm amused. He's obsessed with cats? That's funny. I like the relationship between God and the Prince of Darkness. It makes me laugh.
7/11/2007 c1 nolongeraround
Hmm...that almost sounded like a riddle. This story seem very interesting just after the intro.
Hmm...that almost sounded like a riddle. This story seem very interesting just after the intro.
7/11/2007 c2 Princess Narcotic
I like this story alot. It is very original and clever, and inventive. I can't wait for more! The writing style and the unique ideas are very appealing. Keep it up!
I like this story alot. It is very original and clever, and inventive. I can't wait for more! The writing style and the unique ideas are very appealing. Keep it up!