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2/7/2009 c1 1TheEntertainer26
That made a huge sense of empathy arise within me...what a fantastic poem - you really do have your own unique style, which includes many techniques I have yet to study and it creates such strong imagery through the words you use - I imagine someone walking out of my vision into a thick fog in this one, my hand reaching out to grab them uselessly when I read "I had our entire change - Right in my clutch"...

5 star and then some work from you!

~Ben
7/28/2007 c1 Jaded Flux
This reminds me of all four of us...

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