for Golden Wings2/24/2013 c1 Spencer
The rhymes turned out great, I love the language you use.
The rhymes turned out great, I love the language you use.
2/5/2009 c1 
1TheEntertainer26
You've rekindled my love of poetry - if only we could study you for our GCSE English course...your work is so much more fascinating and thought and emotion provoking.
That last line is the perfect ending and is quite chilling...
I am in love with your poetry.
~Ben
1TheEntertainer26You've rekindled my love of poetry - if only we could study you for our GCSE English course...your work is so much more fascinating and thought and emotion provoking.
That last line is the perfect ending and is quite chilling...
I am in love with your poetry.
~Ben
7/13/2007 c1 11PocoSnow15
Oh wow. The last verse was my favorite. "I thought you'd never lie/And I believed what you said of me." So true and completely amazing! Great job!
11PocoSnow15Oh wow. The last verse was my favorite. "I thought you'd never lie/And I believed what you said of me." So true and completely amazing! Great job!