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7/22/2007 c1 1Kevin Miles
I like to elaborate on things I read. I also like to write response poems. So don't take this the wrong way or as an invasive editing attempt. I was merely inspired...

"The man cries out

and is carried away..."

his hand out-streatched

to the woman in the crowd

whose tear falls down

her cheek so soft

her skin so guilty

of his death so innocent

her heart is broken

his mind will die

they both will woe this day

"the Reaper [has claimed] his prey

as the justice is served."

to the one whose words

will drop her tears

on the innocent ashes

of the one whose love she had.

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