for A Purposeful Accident7/18/2007 c1 
2CoffeeBreak
Your story has style, and is well-written. In regards to making the language more authentic, researching the Internet does wonders. Overall, good job so far!
2CoffeeBreakYour story has style, and is well-written. In regards to making the language more authentic, researching the Internet does wonders. Overall, good job so far!