8/5/2010 c1 2Fish E
"Undergone changes
Definitely inevitable"
i loved this line! I don't know why, but it sent chills down my spine. I wish I could explain, but something about it is really cool. Anyway, overall good poem, with an interesting format and stanzas that make one think
"Undergone changes
Definitely inevitable"
i loved this line! I don't know why, but it sent chills down my spine. I wish I could explain, but something about it is really cool. Anyway, overall good poem, with an interesting format and stanzas that make one think
11/10/2007 c1 62Oracle of Destiny
I liked this very much and I found it very haunting yet sad at the same time.
I liked how it flowed perfectly and there is an understatement of raw human emotion and fragile needs and wants in the world :) Great job with this and carry on with the good work.
By the way, thanks for reviewing me xD
I liked this very much and I found it very haunting yet sad at the same time.
I liked how it flowed perfectly and there is an understatement of raw human emotion and fragile needs and wants in the world :) Great job with this and carry on with the good work.
By the way, thanks for reviewing me xD
8/21/2007 c1 6concerto49
Heya. Concerto.
The structure was cool. I liked how it was divided and all.
Good use of the first and second person too.
Hm, interesting.
Anyhow. Cheers.
Heya. Concerto.
The structure was cool. I liked how it was divided and all.
Good use of the first and second person too.
Hm, interesting.
Anyhow. Cheers.