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12/17/2010 c1 23fatbird33
i enjoyed the last two lines. interesting questions
8/5/2010 c1 2Fish E
"Undergone changes

Definitely inevitable"

i loved this line! I don't know why, but it sent chills down my spine. I wish I could explain, but something about it is really cool. Anyway, overall good poem, with an interesting format and stanzas that make one think
11/10/2007 c1 62Oracle of Destiny
I liked this very much and I found it very haunting yet sad at the same time.

I liked how it flowed perfectly and there is an understatement of raw human emotion and fragile needs and wants in the world :) Great job with this and carry on with the good work.

By the way, thanks for reviewing me xD
8/21/2007 c1 6concerto49
Heya. Concerto.

The structure was cool. I liked how it was divided and all.

Good use of the first and second person too.

Hm, interesting.

Anyhow. Cheers.
7/19/2007 c1 3Lumaris
Wow... nice poem, written nicely. Deep message too... hurting people is bad -.-

~FoxyWriter

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