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8/31/2007 c1 1xElmo
Your English teacher accepted that?

Lol.

I liked it - but then again, I don't mind gore, so, yeah.

I only expected the ending after I saw 'Happy Father's Da', hehe.

It deserves more reviews btw.

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8/15/2007 c1 5Twist130
Wow, this was really good. Definitely not expecting the ending. Definitely.

It's so ironic that she kills him because she loves him, and in some sick way she's trying to make him happy. But how does Steve fit in?

Was Steve having an affair with Lila's mom, but then she ended it so he killed her and then messed with the daughter's head? Then hated Yates because the mom chose Yates over Steve, and so wanted to kill him?

hmm. Well, regardless, it was very good (gruesome, yes) but very good.
7/19/2007 c1 2simplicity is complex
i never never never EVER expected this.

ew.

and steve probably made sure that it was happy father's day and not any other day was it! and he made sure that there was only ONE Y and that Y had to end the whole thing so he could kill yates!

ew.

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