
7/21/2007 c1
1iWannaGoHomeNow
Story & idea are interesting, although when I read the title I thought you'd started taking crack... again.
:P

Story & idea are interesting, although when I read the title I thought you'd started taking crack... again.
:P
7/18/2007 c1
2winniemazing
i liked the concept a lot. i got what you were trying to say, and it's a really powerful message, but the execution wasn't as great as i would have liked. i think all the talk of magazines and TV shows kind of distracted from your message. this probably would have been better if you had planned a little more.
i like how you think
you're cool :)

i liked the concept a lot. i got what you were trying to say, and it's a really powerful message, but the execution wasn't as great as i would have liked. i think all the talk of magazines and TV shows kind of distracted from your message. this probably would have been better if you had planned a little more.
i like how you think
you're cool :)
7/18/2007 c1 Kayla
Unusual, but very nice.
Unusual, but very nice.