for Hell Bound Saints6/20/2012 c1 kemeshat
As for this chapter, I was captivated by the command Cal gave to Neico. It gave me the push to read what's next in the following chapter. Being that I know the Author (Hi), I can hear his voice as I read lol.
As for this chapter, I was captivated by the command Cal gave to Neico. It gave me the push to read what's next in the following chapter. Being that I know the Author (Hi), I can hear his voice as I read lol.
4/8/2010 c1 
7staticjana
I'm loving this plot line. And I'm ABSOLUTELY loving your writing style. I am so going to continue reading when I get home :]
7staticjanaI'm loving this plot line. And I'm ABSOLUTELY loving your writing style. I am so going to continue reading when I get home :]
12/4/2009 c5 1Mak Hertz
I liked how we got to see what all of the characters are up to in this chapter. And you've tied in the new characters from the last chapter (not that I ever doubted you would). Glad to see that things are moving forward for everyone. I'm interested to see who Mal's meeting is with / how it goes for him. It would be nice if it actually helped him out, though he seems to be doing a good job for himself already. Keep up the good work. :)
1Mak HertzI liked how we got to see what all of the characters are up to in this chapter. And you've tied in the new characters from the last chapter (not that I ever doubted you would). Glad to see that things are moving forward for everyone. I'm interested to see who Mal's meeting is with / how it goes for him. It would be nice if it actually helped him out, though he seems to be doing a good job for himself already. Keep up the good work. :)
12/3/2009 c4 Mak Hertz
You updated! Yay! I really like your work, and so I put you on author alert. I was quite excited to see an update. I mean, seriously excited. You've definitely got some great ideas! I was a bit lost about what the queen had to do with anything, but I imagine that'll all make sense in the long run. Or maybe I just missed something since I was semi-distracted while reading.
I'm not sure if you're planning on writing again regularly or not, but if you are, I'd still be glad to be your beta. I'm a little busier than I was the last time you used me, but I'd still love to do it. However, it's cool if you'd rather not.
Anyway, yay for the update! I hope there's more to come! :)
You updated! Yay! I really like your work, and so I put you on author alert. I was quite excited to see an update. I mean, seriously excited. You've definitely got some great ideas! I was a bit lost about what the queen had to do with anything, but I imagine that'll all make sense in the long run. Or maybe I just missed something since I was semi-distracted while reading.
I'm not sure if you're planning on writing again regularly or not, but if you are, I'd still be glad to be your beta. I'm a little busier than I was the last time you used me, but I'd still love to do it. However, it's cool if you'd rather not.
Anyway, yay for the update! I hope there's more to come! :)
12/6/2008 c1 12DesertWolf4
I liked this story. There were some issues like fairly close to the beginning you used 'thin' instead of then. Also, in my opinion, when you say 'Earth 597 "The Age of Faith" The 9th Day in the Month of the Bull' I feel like you should put that in bold or italics to make it stand out more.
But other than that because I really did like it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
12DesertWolf4I liked this story. There were some issues like fairly close to the beginning you used 'thin' instead of then. Also, in my opinion, when you say 'Earth 597 "The Age of Faith" The 9th Day in the Month of the Bull' I feel like you should put that in bold or italics to make it stand out more.
But other than that because I really did like it. Can't wait for the next chapter.