for Scotland Has a Face Too6/25/2012 c1 Reul-iuil
Pretty short, but it kinda has me wanting more. One review from me probably wont get you inspired to update quickly, but I hope you do soon :]
Pretty short, but it kinda has me wanting more. One review from me probably wont get you inspired to update quickly, but I hope you do soon :]
7/27/2007 c1 
6Carmel March
This is an excellent beginning to the story. I love the richness of your writing. It's not something you come across too often on Fictionpress. Good job on this, and I can't wait for more :)
~carm~
6Carmel MarchThis is an excellent beginning to the story. I love the richness of your writing. It's not something you come across too often on Fictionpress. Good job on this, and I can't wait for more :)
~carm~
7/19/2007 c1 Sapph
Interesting beginning. I'm looking forward to the "she bumped into a tall brawny man." part though :D
Interesting beginning. I'm looking forward to the "she bumped into a tall brawny man." part though :D
7/18/2007 c1 6concerto49
"Is he just another pawn in life’s mysterious ways?" - everything else there was in past tense.
Didn't exactly see the humor or is that later?
Well it's more of an intro, and it didn't start much so can't say. It's a little typical at the moment. Have to see. Cheers!
6concerto49"Is he just another pawn in life’s mysterious ways?" - everything else there was in past tense.
Didn't exactly see the humor or is that later?
Well it's more of an intro, and it didn't start much so can't say. It's a little typical at the moment. Have to see. Cheers!