for Poetastery!7/6/2008 c2 
25Night Silver's whisper
It has a strange rythm to it that appeals to me. A strange...soul drifting in the words and patterns that I can't explain but calls out to me and has a flow close to that of lightly darkened silver.
One of my favorites, indeed.
NS
25Night Silver's whisperIt has a strange rythm to it that appeals to me. A strange...soul drifting in the words and patterns that I can't explain but calls out to me and has a flow close to that of lightly darkened silver.
One of my favorites, indeed.
NS
7/6/2008 c1 Night Silver's whisper
reading this aloud to myself, I got a real good chuckle. Well done, I do say.
NS
reading this aloud to myself, I got a real good chuckle. Well done, I do say.
NS
7/19/2007 c1 6concerto49
It was thin and long. Haven't seen that in a while.
"There are we whose tongues drip with poisons" - that didn't sound that right.
Echo echo sounds like testing testing-styled calls.
It sounded like you were talking to someone, someone imaginary.
Anyhow cool.
6concerto49It was thin and long. Haven't seen that in a while.
"There are we whose tongues drip with poisons" - that didn't sound that right.
Echo echo sounds like testing testing-styled calls.
It sounded like you were talking to someone, someone imaginary.
Anyhow cool.
7/19/2007 c1 Foofoocuddlypoops
I really like how you used repetition in your work. Not only is it fun to read aloud but it also gives the poem an uber neat cadence. It's also nice how you bring the adore/abhor bit around full circle. Nice closure. All around goodness, methinks.
I really like how you used repetition in your work. Not only is it fun to read aloud but it also gives the poem an uber neat cadence. It's also nice how you bring the adore/abhor bit around full circle. Nice closure. All around goodness, methinks.