for Fighting Water7/28/2007 c1 
4Willow Troy
Very nice. I really liked how you portrayed her desperation and the deeper emotions that are generally harder to catch in words. Good job.
4Willow TroyVery nice. I really liked how you portrayed her desperation and the deeper emotions that are generally harder to catch in words. Good job.
7/27/2007 c1 12Kurt Wagner
very interesting.
the dirty needle part made me flinch.
and the water scene was very well described.
well done.
P.S. thanks for the review. Perhaps now i will post the rest, even though it is so juvenile.
12Kurt Wagnervery interesting.
the dirty needle part made me flinch.
and the water scene was very well described.
well done.
P.S. thanks for the review. Perhaps now i will post the rest, even though it is so juvenile.