for Pacific Night7/26/2007 c1 
48MarvellousMarvin
this was really lovely! the metaphors and the images wrere really awesome and i love your style of writing..the way it all flows into eachother kinda mocks the coninuity of the waves.
really really nice!
thanks for the reviews if i didnt already thank you! (sorry ive been away and lost track!)
48MarvellousMarvinthis was really lovely! the metaphors and the images wrere really awesome and i love your style of writing..the way it all flows into eachother kinda mocks the coninuity of the waves.
really really nice!
thanks for the reviews if i didnt already thank you! (sorry ive been away and lost track!)
7/21/2007 c1 44AuraBorealis
that was so wonderful. it was probly the best i have ever read in a while.
44AuraBorealisthat was so wonderful. it was probly the best i have ever read in a while.
7/20/2007 c1 7cpneb
And, He looked down and smiled: Yes, you are, and, yes, you will be!
I'm sorry for your loss; losing a close friend, no matter your age, is painful. I lost one of my closest 3 years ago, and I still miss her, but I have learned to praise and her good works and remember the good times we had together.
This is a very nice work: not what I would have expected from the title, but not disappointing at all.
Reach for the stars, and they shall, indeed, be yours.
...cpneb
7cpnebAnd, He looked down and smiled: Yes, you are, and, yes, you will be!
I'm sorry for your loss; losing a close friend, no matter your age, is painful. I lost one of my closest 3 years ago, and I still miss her, but I have learned to praise and her good works and remember the good times we had together.
This is a very nice work: not what I would have expected from the title, but not disappointing at all.
Reach for the stars, and they shall, indeed, be yours.
...cpneb