for Remember to Breathe3/21/2010 c3 
1BettyBoo
I re-read this story today. It was so damn good and I realy really hope you will return someday and finish it!
1BettyBooI re-read this story today. It was so damn good and I realy really hope you will return someday and finish it!
10/14/2007 c2 cheated-hearts
I just want to point out a couple of things. In the first chapter you say that Jordan has eyes like her father's which are hazel, but in this chapter you change her eyes to green. The other thing is that her bother's name if Damein but you change his name to Caleb. Is Caleb his name or Damien?
Other than that its coming out really good and i can't wait for the next chapter.
I just want to point out a couple of things. In the first chapter you say that Jordan has eyes like her father's which are hazel, but in this chapter you change her eyes to green. The other thing is that her bother's name if Damein but you change his name to Caleb. Is Caleb his name or Damien?
Other than that its coming out really good and i can't wait for the next chapter.