Just In
for Remember to Breathe

3/21/2010 c3 1BettyBoo
I re-read this story today. It was so damn good and I realy really hope you will return someday and finish it!
10/14/2007 c2 cheated-hearts
I just want to point out a couple of things. In the first chapter you say that Jordan has eyes like her father's which are hazel, but in this chapter you change her eyes to green. The other thing is that her bother's name if Damein but you change his name to Caleb. Is Caleb his name or Damien?

Other than that its coming out really good and i can't wait for the next chapter.
9/8/2007 c1 FHJL88
This is awesome, please update soon!

p.s. He sounds really hot.
7/21/2007 c1 9YourShoesDon'tFit
Not much to say, good start. Plz continue! He sounds SO hott! ;)
7/20/2007 c1 CHIIJOY
I love the starting. Please update soon.

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service