
10/31/2009 c2
1igot4
Well I hope continue with this story its very interesting want to know how they got together...

Well I hope continue with this story its very interesting want to know how they got together...
10/31/2008 c1 sjrucker
GIRL! PLEASE, by all that is good and right in this world, FINISH this story! It is VERY intriguing! I just hope to hell that Dallas isn't getting married...I hope he's the brother! PLEASE,i'm begging you! UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE!
Sho
GIRL! PLEASE, by all that is good and right in this world, FINISH this story! It is VERY intriguing! I just hope to hell that Dallas isn't getting married...I hope he's the brother! PLEASE,i'm begging you! UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE!
Sho
10/26/2008 c1 darkfaer
I was bit confuse but when reread the story. I got it! Especially when I read last sentence in the story. Skinhead huh that is a twist. I hope you continue this story. Because it is orginol and I like the plot. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue want more...
I was bit confuse but when reread the story. I got it! Especially when I read last sentence in the story. Skinhead huh that is a twist. I hope you continue this story. Because it is orginol and I like the plot. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue want more...
4/13/2008 c1
5Phucking Kewl
Awesome, I wish you'll update soon! I really enjoy this. Your descriptions are nice and your dialogue is exciting, not flat at all! You have a flair for the dramatics (hence its categorized as 'drama' ^_^) and that is always brilliant for a reader like me.

Awesome, I wish you'll update soon! I really enjoy this. Your descriptions are nice and your dialogue is exciting, not flat at all! You have a flair for the dramatics (hence its categorized as 'drama' ^_^) and that is always brilliant for a reader like me.
3/23/2008 c1 rosesdiary
man please... right more you had me hooked in the summaray! lookin for updates!
man please... right more you had me hooked in the summaray! lookin for updates!
3/2/2008 c1
10BabyPop Massacre
Wow.This is very interesting. Good development so far. Hope you update.
Peace.

Wow.This is very interesting. Good development so far. Hope you update.
Peace.
2/26/2008 c1 chocolatepink2010
The story is interesting, i would like to see where your gonna take it, great beginning
alexandria
The story is interesting, i would like to see where your gonna take it, great beginning
alexandria
10/26/2007 c1
14Delishous5
It was really good and I couldn't find anything wrong with it! Awesome job! :)

It was really good and I couldn't find anything wrong with it! Awesome job! :)