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7/23/2007 c1 5Something Strange
Wow, this certainly was a very unique, very strange story! I have never read anything like it! It was very well written, kept me till the end. The ending was really shocking. I liked this story, great job!
7/20/2007 c1 6concerto49
I can't imagine having a father like that either.

"which between most couples is sweet," - was

"As she reached page ten a horrible plant engulfed Kelly so she breathed her last breath." - knew what you mean, but wasn't as good

"He slammed the book closed on the demonic plant and put it in a metal cage." - shut would have been better

"If communication is the key to a relationship," - was

Yes! You used tragic. I know so many people that can't tell between tragedy. Something I decided to tell people the true answer in my FSP.

"That is how she found herself in a life-death situation." - was

"and flipped her into the position you are in when a cop arrests you. " - shouldn't use 2nd person here

The ending was ...maybe shocking.

Side note: always thought the name was Chel-se-a until I recently met a friend with that name who corrected me

Anyhow, cheers!

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