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7/23/2007 c1 The Other Smith
Very enjoyable. The sophistication of the narrator and the stereotypical teen characters of William and his friends makes for good humour. Just gets a little hard to read in a few places where the punctuation was lacking or was in the wrong place. I like the idea of replenishing. Kinda reminds me of John Saul's "Midnight Voices", although the replenishers in there used different methods. :)

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