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8/12/2008 c1 W. L. Yancey
This was definitly interesting. Its almost disturbing, but I like the disturbing feeling. To me it suggests that the fallen angel in the story is evil, or bad, but at the same time it suggests that evil is a good thing. I like the angel's personality though. Freedom is great, being able to do whatever the angel feels like must be a relieved feeling. She escaped the chains that religion and beliefs hold. To be able to think whatever you want is a great feeling. This is, of course, how I see it.
7/22/2007 c1 2Levana
This is an interesting idea for a story. However, you could have added a lot more details about your character's life and death. Also, the first sentence of the second to the last paragraph is quite long.

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