11/22/2008 c1 13blurrylights
Hmm...I liked this, but it was a little sudden, the falling in love thing. He didn't even recognize her! That was harsh, and I love a happy ending, but it didn't seem so realistic. But I did like it a lot. It was the perfect fantasy. Good job! :)

7/23/2007 c1 1Kojori
Great story. I love the irony in it. It's always bound to happen in the real world, you know. :) Anyway, keep up the one shots. I'd be glad to keep reading them.