
10/18/2007 c1
495mate.feed.kill.repeat
It is interesting that you put the first line "I am the Virgin Mary" and that I didn't roll my eyes and search for a different poem. I read the whole through and discovered that although the first line references that which I cannot stand, the rest of the poem was that which I love. The emotions, the style, the words. It's amazing.
-STIX-

It is interesting that you put the first line "I am the Virgin Mary" and that I didn't roll my eyes and search for a different poem. I read the whole through and discovered that although the first line references that which I cannot stand, the rest of the poem was that which I love. The emotions, the style, the words. It's amazing.
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7/25/2007 c1 jojoba-music-girl
I think this is one of your best poems you've written. You've put the things you wanted to say in words, but it's still a bit of a mystery. Vague but clear too. Don't really know how to explain what I want to say, so I'll quit trying now. Very, very good one!
[jojoba-music-girl]
I think this is one of your best poems you've written. You've put the things you wanted to say in words, but it's still a bit of a mystery. Vague but clear too. Don't really know how to explain what I want to say, so I'll quit trying now. Very, very good one!
[jojoba-music-girl]