for If you have None8/11/2007 c1 
38changed.by.an.afterthought
this is probably one of my favorite poems u've written. its really simple and powerful, ur getting real good at that.
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38changed.by.an.afterthoughtthis is probably one of my favorite poems u've written. its really simple and powerful, ur getting real good at that.
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7/29/2007 c1 100Nonya Soum
I like the fact that my mind can wander and ponder this because it's so short, but it seems ever so slightly incomplete. I still like it though. Good job!
100Nonya SoumI like the fact that my mind can wander and ponder this because it's so short, but it seems ever so slightly incomplete. I still like it though. Good job!
7/25/2007 c1 22Wolf Wonderer
I think it should have been 'If I have no.." I think it would sound better that way
22Wolf WondererI think it should have been 'If I have no.." I think it would sound better that way