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8/13/2007 c1 33redexted
Hello, and thanks for your review. (:

I think your story here is short but affecting. There's great pacing and subtlety in bringing across the narrator's emotions - without screaming emoangstemo in your face or having a suicide ending, that is. Apart from some confusing punctuation (sorry I'm nitpicky!), this is really good.

Keep on writing!
8/10/2007 c1 LoraliSophia
Thanks for reviewing my story. Anyway, I read your story and its awesome. You did a really good job in your writing. The emotions of the girl are very realistic.
7/31/2007 c1 17scenester7002
Deep. I like it. I am scene or emo, though I was told they were two different things. I chose to write poetry instead of inflicting pain upon myself, a heartache is enough for me.
7/29/2007 c1 Lauren Lizz
Hey, just wanted to say thanks for reviewing my short story the other day-and I also wanted to give you a review in return. This story is very well-written; the way you describe drowning has meaning and is straight to the point. Good job!
7/27/2007 c1 6Tomiko90
Wow...

I don't even know what to say.

I think this is seriously one of the best things I have read.

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