for Too Cold for March9/18/2009 c1 Cracked Sky Ceiling
I love how you work in details. They just come along naturally, like objects in a picture; you never wave them in the reader's face. You may have taken the fragmentation a bit far, but not so far that it didn't still give a wonderful feeling of detatchment and timelessness. Bravo.
I love how you work in details. They just come along naturally, like objects in a picture; you never wave them in the reader's face. You may have taken the fragmentation a bit far, but not so far that it didn't still give a wonderful feeling of detatchment and timelessness. Bravo.
9/13/2007 c1 
16someone's sideshow
I wanna read the other one now!
For some reason, this reminded me of a story that I wrote once involving a bench...although it had nothing else in common with this.
Knowing you, then reading your writings, is weird. You are only the second fictionpress author I have ever met in real life. =D
Go you!
P.S. I just opened my flash drive and found a story on there that I had started, but stopped. It is called "Faye". lol
16someone's sideshowI wanna read the other one now!
For some reason, this reminded me of a story that I wrote once involving a bench...although it had nothing else in common with this.
Knowing you, then reading your writings, is weird. You are only the second fictionpress author I have ever met in real life. =D
Go you!
P.S. I just opened my flash drive and found a story on there that I had started, but stopped. It is called "Faye". lol
8/3/2007 c1 13xtotallyatpeacex
I really quite like this. Ambiguous is always interesting. Nice job, especially with the thoughts in brackets. :D
13xtotallyatpeacexI really quite like this. Ambiguous is always interesting. Nice job, especially with the thoughts in brackets. :D
7/26/2007 c1 Fractured Illusion
Wow. This was really captivating and highly gripping. I like descriptions that just ran so smoothly (I wish I could do that ^^) The mood of melancholy was definitely captured. I take it this person was visiting a grave then? Beautifully conveyed! Kudos on writing this one! *off to read the sequel now!*
Wow. This was really captivating and highly gripping. I like descriptions that just ran so smoothly (I wish I could do that ^^) The mood of melancholy was definitely captured. I take it this person was visiting a grave then? Beautifully conveyed! Kudos on writing this one! *off to read the sequel now!*
7/26/2007 c1 9Queen Anabella
Are you tired of my reviews, yet? Let me tell you-I usually don't leave reviews.
This one was very good as well. I wish I could go more in depth with my review, but I'm just so sleepy and tired. Keep writing, alright?
9Queen AnabellaAre you tired of my reviews, yet? Let me tell you-I usually don't leave reviews.
This one was very good as well. I wish I could go more in depth with my review, but I'm just so sleepy and tired. Keep writing, alright?